托福作文2写作错误ppt课件.ppt

Academic Writing,7类常见错误,1. 省略,Wealthy parents shouldn't spoil their children.,Shouldnt Im Cant Hes,Shouldnt should not Im I am Cant cannot Hes he is / he has he was,2. Informal language,Today, newspapers report lots of crimes in horrible details.,lots of a host of a vast number of numerous a great deal of a great amount of,可数,不可数,3. Spelling,英美词汇差异,The impact of tourism on these traditional neighbourhoods must be analysed. The impact of tourism on these traditional neighborhoods must be analyzed.,英式 美式 se ze/ ce analyse analyze civilise civilize practise practice globalise globalize,v.,英式 美式 our or colour color neighbour neighbor favourite favorite,n.,英式 美式 长 短 storey story dialogue dialog archaeology archeology jewellry jewelry traveller traveler,词汇长短,4. 词汇没有特色,例句1 Serious crimes harm peoples lives., severe offense / criminal act damage / destroy undermine / jeopardize individuals / man / mankind,serious,crime,harm,people,例句2 The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.,例句2 The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.,be more than outweigh,例句3 Our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern Technology.,more and more increasingly + adj on a rise,5. 句子无衔接,1. The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with this situation.,分析句间关系 加衔接词,The environment is becoming worse ; therefore, we must work together to deal with this situation.,2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our work better and faster, their opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem.,2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster, because their opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem.,6. 感情色彩过于强烈 love letter 式写作,So , we should make sure that globalization does not harm our own traditional culture!,! 改。 So不要和should 连用，感情强烈。 therefore,7. 宗教作为引言,We must be friendly to others because the Bible says, “ treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”,引言： 名人名言/ 公认的观点 Bible 圣经：信仰，非逻辑推理,