书面表达66860165.ppt

书面表达训练,苏海玲,如何算是一篇好的文章？,1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】） 3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,书面表达六步法,书面表达,审,抓,遣,连,查,抄,1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态 文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文 要求：（见试题） 人称：第一、二、三人称 时态：过去式或者一般现在式.,2.3： 抓、遣： 列要点（关键词动词或动词词组） 4. 连： (1) 扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。 (2) 组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。,5. 查：复查全文 （1）体裁格式是否正确； （2）内容要点是否全面； （3）全文的行文是否通顺、连贯。 （4）句子的时态、语态是否正确； （5）主谓是否一致； （6）标点符号与大小写有无错误； （7）字数是否相符等。,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,1.Heading 点题，一两个好句；概括性,2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending 小结，呼应主题,选好词，写好句,一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。,指点迷津,你将很容易找到我的家,You will find my house easily.,-,-,-,S,V,O,时态：一般将来时。S+Will +V原形,1、You will find my house easily.,have no difficulty in doing sth,Youll have no trouble/difficulty (in) finding my house.,她很喜欢运动。,She likes sports very much.,-,-,-,S,V,O,1.Be fond of 2.be into 3.be interested in 4.enjoy,She is fond of sports. She is into sports. She is interested in sports. She enjoys sports.,我们将尽力学好英语。,Try to do sth,Well try to learn English well.,do everything sb can to do sth,Try to do sth,1.I hope to receive your letter soon. 2.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.,Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.,Because of/Thanks to/Owing to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词,短语选择使用其他恰当的同义词、词组来代替。,1.He learns English well,he learns maths well ,too. 2.An earthquake happened in Wenchuan. It happened on May 12th.,do well in be good at,take place come about,三、学会套用句型,1.He was very tired. He couldnt walk any farther.,tooto,He was too tired to walk any farther.,Because people communicate in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English. With so many people communicating in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.,Text book page 11,With+宾语+宾语补足语 （doing/done/adj/to do/adv）,1.Because he has a lot of homework to do, he doesnt watch TV. 2.Mr.li came into the classroom, he has a book in his hand. 3.The farmer sleeps, and his window is open.,With+宾语+宾语补足语 （doing/done/adj/to do/adv）,With a lot of homework to do,with a book in his hand,with his window open.,2.If you study hard, you will make great progress.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,祈使句+and/or+陈述句（陈述句要用将来时态）,I was late for school because I got up late.,The reason whyis that,The reason why I was late for school was that I got up late.,四、通过合句，将意义相关的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过收缩，去掉一些多余的成分，或无意义的重复，避免冗长累赘，松散无力，以增强句子的连贯性，达到更好的表达效果。,I am seventeen years old this year,that is to say,Ill be eighteen years old in 2011.,Ill be eighteen years old in 2011.,The school is surrounded by many green trees.It looks very beautiful.,The school surrounded by many green trees looks very beautiful.,The school looks very beautiful with many green trees surrounding it.,五、有效的使用句子间的连接成分，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅。,Cellphone is popular among teenagers. Cellphone makes it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. Cellphone makes teenagers feel cool.,cellphone is popular among teenagers. cellphones make it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. cellphones make teenagers feel cool.,As we all know,On one hand,On the other hand,I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks. We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get much information. We can send E-mails or make phone calls to our family.We can attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. ,In my opinion,rather than,As we all know,is playing,a more and more important role,Use better phrases to replace the common ones.,Practice Improve the passage,not only,but also,Besides we,但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。,多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译,