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1、高中英语作文写作技巧Mr Moor, our English teacher, is a lovely man. He is thirty-four years old and he is from the United States. We all love him thanks to his teaching attitude that every one can learn English well as long as he/she works harder. No matter when we ask him questions, he is always glad to answe
2、r them. Furthermore, he often asks us to study the questions and problems carefully before we start to solve them. It is demanded that every student raise and answer a question every day. As he said, asking why is able to assist us to know more. With time flying, we have been making more and more pr
3、ogresses, and of course, we admire him more and more. 今年命题者用诗歌的形式来表现提纲。同学们第一次接触到这种命题形式,乍一看确实有点手足无措,仔细分析其实今年的命题在实质上并没有发生改变,依然是换汤不换药(old wine ,new bottle),完全就是一个穿上时尚外衣的老朋友提纲式作文。 此题等价于如下考生最擅长的提纲式作文: 题目:My Teacher Mr.Moore 内容必须包含以下三点: 1(lovely and thirty-four 2(encourage us, leads us to a world of “why”
4、 3(we admire him more and more 此时大家再来写这篇作文,就会觉得得心应手,因为大家平常训练最多的也就是这种类型。 根据提纲式作文写法分析如下: 第一段:提出文章要描述的对象,于是就可以写出第一段内容Of all my teachers, Mr.Moore is the one who impressed me most.当然最好不要写成This is my teacher Mr.Moore.这种开头一般是介绍或者寻人启事,呵呵。 第二段:详细描述,根据提纲中的关键词lovely, thirty four, encourage us, leads us to a w
5、orld of “why”加以组织,连接成有逻辑关系且阐述清楚的话语,这也是这篇文章的考点所在。于是可以这样来适当添加内容: Though he is 34, he appears very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers among our students. Compared with other teachers, Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his class
6、es vivid and interesting. He always tells us we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”, so, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, weve learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wond
7、erful world of “why” he leads us to! 这一段第一句就相当好,首先用Though来过渡。接着连词and继续描述Mr.Moore的特征the most popular. Compared with词组自然过渡到描述Mr.Moore如何encourage us to try ,然后用with his help来总结他的教学给我们带来的影响。本段末尾用一个感叹句来揭示leads us to a world of “why”。文中连词用得相当好,每一句话都有连词来过渡,这是同学们最缺乏的。另外文章句型的多变性也值得大家学习,比如使用固定搭配not onlybut al
8、so, compared with, instead of, with his help等,这些使得文章必然是满分。同学们平时应该有意识地用连词连接自己说的每一句话。使自己的文章更加紧凑,层次清晰;同时记得使用比较好的固定搭配,让你的文章增色。 第三段:总结自己的观点。这是各种文体的通用写法。根据提纲中的we admire him more and more.为了承接第二段内容,我们写出一个承上启下的句子:He is so learned that we all admire him very much and we all love him for ever. 最后总结高考作文变化的应对策略
9、,同学们应该沉着,敏锐地分析高考作文花架子下的实质,这样大家就可以以不变应万变。无论高考作文形式怎么变,大家的高分永不变 附范文: My Teacher Mr.Moore Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impressed me most. Though he is 34,he appears very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers among our students.Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore p
10、ays more attention to his way of teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes vivid and interesting. And he always tells us we should not only know “what”,but also understand “why”,so,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward quest
11、ions. With his help,weve learned how to analyze and settle problems.What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! He is so learned that we all admire him very much and we all love him for ever. Recently I have made an investigation among 100 students of Senior.One in our school.About 45 precent st
12、udents go to school without breakfast. While 35 percent students do not treat breakfast seriously.Only 20 percent students have enough breakfast with nutrition every morning. Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Others
13、 are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them. In addition, a few school girls want to stay silm and often go to school without breakfast. In fact breakfast is very important. It can make you have good member, and good judgemen
14、t, and make you in good heip. So every student should start their day with a regular breakfast. 上网的利弊 时间:2009-05-07 15:10作者: 点击: 14319次 Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Ten years ago, the Internet was practically unheard of by most people. Today, the Internet is one of the most powerful
15、tools throughout the world. The Internet is a collection of various services and resources. According to Russ Brock, a director and consultant at the Center for Innovation and Inquiry, the Internets main components are E-mail and the World Wide Web. “Theres a lot more to the Internet than E-mail, se
16、arch engines, celerity web sites, up-to-the-second sports scores, and chat rooms full of risqu discussions. The Net also ranks as one of todays best business tools - if its used adroitly”. Almost all households contain the Internet; however, before people connect to the Internet, they need to be awa
17、re of its disadvantages and advantages. Many fear the Internet because of its disadvantages. They claim to not use the Internet because they are afraid of the possible consequences or are simply not interested. People who have yet connected to the Internet claim they are not missing anything. Todays
18、 technological society must realize, it is up to them to protect themselves on the Internet “Half of U.S. adults, or 94 million Americans, arent online”. Children using the Internet has become a big concern. Most parents do not realize the dangers involved when their children log onto the Internet.
19、When children are online, they can easily be lured into something dangerous. When children talk to others online, they do not realize they could actually be talking to a harmful person. As a result, there have been many cases where children have been convinced to meet people they have talked with on
20、line. In fact, “stories seem to come out every week: a child or teenager lured into something foolish, dangerous, or even deadly on line” . Cathy Cleaver of the Family Research Council claims that it is against the law for a molester to even attempt to find children online . In addition, children ma
21、y also receive pornography online by mistake; therefore, causing concern among parents everywhere. Whether surfing the Web, reading newsgroups, or using email, children can be exposed to extremely inappropriate material. Pornographic sites tend to make sure they are the first sites to be listed in a
22、ny search area; thus, children come across such sites easily. A man from Pearl, Mississippi was arrested in 1996 for downloading pornographic images of children from the Internet. He was charged with 290 counts of child pornography . Some critics say that parents are responsible for their own childr
23、en on the Internet because there are available services to protect children. To keep children safe, parents and teachers must be aware of the dangers. They must actively guide and guard their children online. Parents should talk to their children about what is online and what might happen online, cl
24、aims Howard Rheingold, writer of The Virtual Community . There are a number of tools available today that may help keep the Internet environment safer for children. Some companies, such as America Online, try to monitor everything that is said and done on their online service; however, because thous
25、ands of chat rooms are available, it is simply impossible for everything to be monitored, claims Tricia Primrose, worker for America Online . In other words, children want to explore things; however, there are people on the Internet that are just too persuasive. 高中英语作文经典句型 Source: Onion 2009-04-23 我
26、要投稿 恒星英语学习论坛 Favorite 高中英语作文经典句型 一、 the + est +名词+(that)+主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read,etc) the most +形容词+名词+(that)+主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read,etc) 例句: Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever
27、had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V 例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调的重要性也不为过。) 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调
28、保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 四、There is no denying that + S + V(不可否认的) 例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 五、It is universally acknowledged that +句子(全世界都知道) 例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
29、 六、There is no doubt that +句子(毫无疑问的) 例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage of is that +句子(的优点是) 例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create(produce)any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 八、The reason why +句
30、子 is that +句子(的原因是) 例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 九、So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此以致于) 例句:So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.时间是
31、如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。 十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be,S + V(虽然) 例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不 虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 十一、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V (愈
32、愈) 例句:The harder you work,the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈进步。 The more books we read,the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。 十二、By +Ving, can (借着,能够 例句: By taking exercise,we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、 enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(使能够) 例句:Listening to music enable us to feel
33、 relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 十四、On no account can we + V (我们绝对不能) 例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 十五、It is time + S +过去式(该是的时候了) 例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 十六、Those who (的人) 例句: T
34、hose who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 十七、There is no one but (没有人不) 例句:There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。 十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不) 例句:Since the examination is around the corner,I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫
35、,我不得不放弃做运动。 十九、It is conceivable that +句子(可想而知的) It is obvious that +句子(明显的) It is apparent that +句子(显然的) 例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 二十、That is the reason why (那就是的原因) 例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it. 夏
36、天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 二十一、For the past +时间,S +现在完成式(过去年来,一直) 例句:For the past two years,I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。 二十二、Since + S +过去式,S +现在完成式。 例句:Since he went to senior high school,he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中,他一直很用功。 二十三、It pays to + V (是值得的。) 例句:It pays to hel
37、p others. 帮助别人是值得的。 二十四、be based on(以为基础) 例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遗余力的) 例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to +人+事(让明白事) 例句:We should bring home to people the value of work
38、ing hard. 我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。 二十七、be closely related to (与息息相关) 例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。 二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V(养成的习惯) 例句:We should get into the habit of keeping good hours. 我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving,(因为) 例
39、句:Thanks to his encouragement,I finally realized my dream. 因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。 三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V= How + Adj + a + N + V(多么) 例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise How important a thing it is to keep our promise遵守诺言是多么重要的事 三十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不满意) 例句:The condition of
40、our traffic leaves much to be desired. 我们的交通状况令人不满意。 三十二、Have a great influence on (对有很大的影响) 例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。 三十三、do good to(对有益),do harm to(对有害) 例句:Reading does good to our mind. 读书对心灵有益。 Overwork does harm to health. 工作过度对健康有害。 三十四、Pose a great threat
41、 to (对造成一大威胁) 例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。 三十五、do ones utmost to + V = do ones best(尽全力去) 例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标 高中英语作文常用句型 Source: Onion 2009-04-22 我要投稿 恒星英语学习论坛 Favorite 高中英语作文常用句型 一、根据衔接词本身在文章中起到的作用,主要分为以下四类,即
42、“起”、“承”、“转”、“合”。 (一)表示“起”的词/词组:用于开篇引出扩展句。 at first 最初 for one thing(for another) at present 现在;当今 首先(其次) currently 目前;最后 recently 最近 first(ly)第一 in general 一般说来 in the beginning 起初 one the one hand(on the other hand) to begin with 首先;第一 一方面(另一方面) first of all 首先;第一 generally speaking 一般地说 in the fir
43、st place 首先;第一 on the whole 总起来说 lately 最近 to start with 首先;第一 presently 现在;此刻 now 现在 (二)有关“承”的常用词语:用来承接上文。 after/after that/afterwards此后 by this time 此时 after a few days 几天以后 certainly 无疑地;当然地 after a while过了一会儿 therefore 因此;结果 also/too 并且;又 for example 例如 at the same time 同时 for instance 例如 beside
44、 此外 for this purpose 为了这个目的 Besides/what,s more 而且;此外 from now on 从此 in addition 此外 second 第二;第二点 in addition to 除之外 secondly 第二 in fact 事实上 similarly 同样地 in other words 换句话说 so 所以 in particular 特别(地) soon 不久 in the same way 同样地 still 仍然 by the way 顺便提一句 then 然后 indeed 的确 third 第三;第三点 meanwhile 与此同时
45、 thirdly 第三 moreover 而且,此外 for another 其次 no doubt 无疑地 such as 正如 obviously 明显地 later 后来 of course当然 truly 事实上;真实地 particularly特别地 unlike 不像;和不同 what is more 而且;此外 (三)有关“转”的常用词语:用来表示不同或相反的意见。 after all 毕竟 fortunately 幸运地 all the same 依然;照样 however 然而;无论如何 anyway 无论如何 in spite of 尽管;虽然 at the same ti
46、me同时;然而 luckily 幸运地 but 但是 by this time 此时 though/although 尽管 no doubt 无疑地 in/by contrast 对比之下 on the contrary 相反地 even though即使 otherwise 否则 still 仍然 unfortunately 不幸地 in fact 事实上 unlike 不像;和不同 as a matter of fact 事实上 yet仍;然而;但是 especially 特别地 (四)有关“合”的常用词语:用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。 above all 最重要的是 accordin
47、gly 于是 as a result结果 in sum 总之,简而言之 as has been noted 如前所述 in summary 简要地说 as I have said 如我所述 on the whole 总体来说;整个看来 at last 最后 therefore 因此 by and large 一般说来 thus 因此 briefly 简单扼要地 to speak frankly 坦白地说 by doing so 如此 to sum up 总而言之 eventually 最后 surely 无疑 finally 最后 to conclude 总而言之 in brief 简言之 no doubt 毫无疑问 in conclusion 总之,最后 undoubtedly 无疑 in short 简而言之 truly 的确 in a word 总之 so 所以 certainly 当然地;无疑地 obviously 显然 all in all 总之 二、根据衔接词本身的意思和文章连接所需要的逻辑意义,可分为以下14类。 (一)表示因果关系 as a result He never studied hard, and as a result he failed in the last e
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