09-10年浙江高考英语阅卷反馈.pps
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1、m.feir,语言要准确得体; 上下文要合乎逻辑; 避开中国式英语; 忌讳生搬硬造。,2011高考英语第二轮专题复习书面表达,谈近年浙江高考英语阅卷,图书馆的书的种类太少,如何表达得体?,忌讳 正面出击,生搬硬造, 中国式英语,最近的书面表达,同学们遇到的句子1,There are few kinds of books on the shelves.,The choice of the books is too limited.,The kind of books is too few.,经过售后服务,洗衣机修好了,但衣服洗不干净,而且洗衣机噪音很大。,最近的书面表达,同学们遇到的句子2,看看
2、你同学是如何表达的?请你呕吐:,After repairing, the washing machine can work normally, but it cant wash clothes clean. 这样的表达!,写作时要特别注意,1.单词拼写 2.时态语态 3.句子的衔接,过渡 4.主谓一致 5.动词的过去式, 过去分词 6.句子是否完整,你的书面表达通常会有哪些问题?,09-10年浙江高考阅卷反馈,2009年浙江省高考英语书面表达阅卷情况分析,题目: 5月1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home )
3、开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则100120 个词的新闻报道。时间、地点、人物、活动; 老人们的反应; 简短评论。注意:报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计词数)。 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly,Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine
4、Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then , they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatt
5、ing with the elderly people. When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their o
6、wn lives.(123words),新闻报道 叙事 简短评论,阅卷过程中发现的问题,1. 词汇方面 (1)拼写错误(见下表),(2)用词不当(见下表),篇章方面,行文之间带有明显的套路痕迹,生搬硬套,堆砌辞藻。请看以下考生例文: The elderly were very pleased with them. Several factors contributed to it. For one thing, they not only brought fresh fruit to the elderly but also had a close talk with the elderly.
7、 For another, they spent much time cleaning the Sunshine Nursing Home. Most important of all, they showed great respect for the elderly. As far as I am concerned, I am undoubtedly in favor of this practice. What they have done will encourage more people care for the elderly. Only in this way can our
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