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1、,授课:焦聪聪,Advice on Writing Good Compositions,2005年福建高考卷(NMET) 目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生 征文,标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”请根据下列提示用英 语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下:,注意:1短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥; 2短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 3词数:100左右。 4参考词汇:作弊 cheat(v.) My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us
2、all that some students cheat in examinations at school.,Tables(表格),2006年湖北高考卷(NMET) 受某英文报的委托,你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息,用英语 为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。 调查内容:在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中,学生最喜欢哪一种? 调查范围:湖北省的10所中学 调查对象:高中生 调查人数:1200 调查方式:访谈 调查结果:(见下图),Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Re
3、cent, survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students,Charts(图表),2004年湖南高考卷(NMET) 假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生暑假打算去乡村度假请根据下面两幅图提供 的信息,写一篇短文简要说明城市生活环境的不足,重点说明你去乡村度假的原因,注意:1短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息,井做适当发挥,使短文内容连贯、完整; 2词数: 100左右,Pictures,2006年全国高考卷(III) 假定你是李华, 亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办, 现在正
4、在招募志愿者, 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信. 内容应包括: 个人情况:年龄、性别、学历 个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、 乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 承诺:提供最佳服务 注意:词数100左右,开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 生词:申请apply (v.), application (n.); 志愿者volunteer Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.,Outline(提纲),Pat
5、terns of writing Pictures 图画作文 Charts 图表作文 Tables 表格作文 Outline 提纲作文,Divide,Top sentence(主题句),Advice on writing good compositions Top sentence(主题句) Coherence (连贯性) Ending(opinion), Top sentence,Main idea of the whole composition,Lead in a composition,Functions,Ideas are clearly stated; well-organized
6、,a good composition,I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students
7、will have more opportu- nities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly. However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we havent mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learner m
8、ay even lose interest in English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.,注意:1. 词数100120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)2. 参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围, Top sentence Practice: find out the top sentence of each part 2. 毕业前
9、夕,你班决定给李老师送一份礼物,大家提出两条建议: (1)送影集(album),里面有每个同学的照片;(2)送磁带,录有每个同学对老师的祝福。 请以“An Album or a Tape”为题,用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议,然后 表明你同意其中哪一条并说明理由。 a短文必须以第一人称书写。 b词数:100词左右。,An Album or A tape How time flies! Well soon graduate and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates. To show our thanks to Miss Li,
10、 we have made a decision to send her a present. Will an album or a tape do? Some of us prefer an album with everyones photo inside. After graduation, there will be few chances to meet again. With an album Miss Li can see us at any time. While others think a tape will be more meaningful, on which our
11、 wishes are recorded. Each time Miss Li plays the tape, our voices will remind her of the pleasant days we have had together. In my opinion, an album is the best choice. Once Miss Li opens the album and looks at the photos one by one, the good old days are to arise in her mind. On the other hand, co
12、mpared with a tape, an album will last longer., Top sentence Practice:write down the top sentence of each part (answers may vary),1. 假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,Andy Smith将 借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy,欢迎他的到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下: 上午:学校活动 下午:游览市区 晚上:看电视,玩游戏,聊天 注意: 1)词数:100左右 2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3)参考词汇:安排arrange,D
13、ear Andy, _ _ _ _.I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, Ill show you around and take you to some places of interest. Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. Im sure well have a wonderful tim
14、e and enjoy each others company. _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua, Top sentence Practice: write down the top sentence of each part(answers may vary) 2. 根据以下图画,写一篇英语短文,描述今昔通讯方式的变化,以及这些变化给人们生 活带来的影响。注意:1)词数:100左右2)生词:通讯:communication n,_ _ _ _ _.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and
15、at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whe- never they like. With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but
16、now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. _,_ _ _ As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness .This can help us make full preparations for the next class .L
17、istening to music also makes us feel happy . _ In their opinion , they cant get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music . _ _In this way students can enjoy music as well as
18、have a good rest .Besides ,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students., Top sentence Practice: write down the top sentence of each part (answers may vary) 3.随着科技的进步,多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时,有些学校利用它来播 放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语 写一篇短文,陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议 。(字数 120 词左右
19、), Coherence (连贯性),conjunction (连词),good vocabulary and sentences,Making compositions look better (形式),Dividing and combination of contents (段中内容的分层与组合),fluent expression; good mastery of sentence structure; coherent(连贯),a good composition, Coherence(连贯性) 一、过渡用语 表示时间关系的过渡用语: first, in the beginning,
20、 first of all, next, second, then, soon, meanwhile, meantime, in the meantime, now, earlier, later, after that, afterward, at that moment, by that time, from then on, presently, eventually, at last, finally, before., after., since., when., while., as soon as., once., until. 表示添加的过渡用语: and, also, too
21、, again, besides, also, another, moreover, furthermore, in addition, as well as, what is more 表示比较的过渡用语: like, alike, in comparison, likewise, in the same way, at the same time, similarly, in like manner, as, as well as, Coherence(连贯性) 表示对照的过渡用语: but, yet, still, however, unlike, instead, whereas, i
22、n spite of, despite, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand, though, although, for one thingfor another 表示原因的过渡用语 because, for, since, as, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to 表示结果的过渡用语: so, thus, therefore, hence, so that, as a result, in this / that way 表示例证的过渡用语: for example, for inst
23、ance, such as, that is, namely, in particular, specifically, as proof of 表示总结的过渡用语: to sum up, to conclude, to summarize, on the whole, all in all, lastly, in short , in brief, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary, Coherence(连贯性) 表示强调的过渡用语: surely, certainly, truly, undoubtedly, clearly,
24、 indeed, in fact, after all, above all, most important, to be sure, without doubt, without a question, as a matter of fact 表示重述的过渡用语: in other words, that is to say, in simpler terms, simply stated, to put it differently 表示综述的过渡用语: generally, generally speaking, in general, in a word, in short, on t
25、he whole, as a rule, for the most part 表示让步的过渡用语: anyhow, anyway, of course, however, in any case, at any rate, Coherence(连贯性) 二、启、承、转、合 (1)启:用于引导主题句,或用于主题句的后面,引导第一个发展句。 first(ly) , at first, first of all, in the beginning, at present, to begin with, lately, for one thing, now, recently, in general,
26、 generally speaking, in my opinion, obviously。 (2)承:用于承接主题句或第一个(或前一个)发展句 Second, third, besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, in pa- rticular, in the same way, after a while, from now on, meanwhile, at the same time,
27、by the time, of course, for the purpose, in fact, in reality, no doubt, certainly, surely, obviously. (3)转:用来表示不同或相反的情况 After all, but, yet, however, although, though, in spite of, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand, in fact, as a matter of fact, otherwise, or else, instead (4)合:用于总结段落中
28、上文的内容,引导一个发展句或结论句,或用于文章 的最后一句 Finally, in conclusion, in brief, in short, in summary, therefore, to conclude, above all, as a result, at last, in general, in a word, on the whole.,Find out all the conjunctions in the passage,Homework (1)2005年福建高考卷(NMET) 目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生 征文,标题是“My Op
29、inion on Cheating in Examinations”请根据下列提示用英 语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下:, Coherence(连贯性),注意:1短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥; 2短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 3词数:100左右。 4参考词汇:作弊 cheat(v.) My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.,1 When he arrives, please give me a
30、n e-mail.(使用V-ing形式) 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句) 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型) 5.As a result, the plan was a failure.,On his arriving, please give me an
31、 e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things., Coherence(连贯性) Appreciate the following sentences,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,The plan turned out to be a failure., Coherence(连贯性)
32、rewrite the following sentences 6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 7.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 8.I wont believe what he says. (使用状语从句) 9.We all think he is a great man. 10. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.,Our scho
33、ol is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,We all think highly of him .,Advice on writing good compositions Top sentence(主题句) Coherence (连贯性) conjunction (连词) goo
34、d vocabulary and sentences Dividing and combination of contents (段中内容的分层与组合) Ending(opinion),英语高考评分标准,2001年春季高考作文 给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信,谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the
35、evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspap-ers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.,17分,2001年春季高考作文 给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信,谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life si
36、nce our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has be
37、come much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,满分,2004年湖南高考卷(NMET) 假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生暑假打算去乡村度假请根据下面两幅图提供 的信息,写一篇短文简要说明城市生活环境的不足,重点说明你去乡村度假的原因,注意:1短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息,井做适当发挥,使短文内容连贯、完整; 2词数: 100左右,Written work:2004年湖南高考卷(NMET) _ _ _ _
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