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1、,段落展开,李恺 KEVIN E-mail: Weibo: kevin-1019,段落要求,Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should help children to do their work or encourage children to do their work independently.,段落要求,well-developed, using clear explanations, exemplification and details. display unity, progress
2、ion and coherence.,段落展开的方法,cause and effect(因果) contrast(对比) exemplification (例证),cause and effect(因果),因果展开(1),因 往前分析:什么使得这一观点/现象/做法成立 从什么能得出这一观点/现象/做法 果 往后分析:这一观点/现象/做法带来什么好处 相反的观点/现象/做法带来什么坏处,因果展开(1),常用的衔接词 it is because the reason is that the reasons are twofold As a result, therefore What happen
3、s is that In the long term, eventually It is even possible that,因果展开(2),SHOW TIME Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reason
4、s and examples to support your opinion.,因果展开(2),例文分析 Firstly, early independence causes many young adults to fail. This should not be surprising since often they are actually not mentally ready although they are physically ready. It is widely understood that to live independently requires a lot of e
5、nergy and is not easy at all. In this twenty first century, people may need more and more preparation because competition is increasing rapidly.,因果展开(2),例子分析 Most young adults prefer to have a separate or independent life from their parents or families as soon as possible. This is because they have
6、a strong urge for freedom in doing what they desire. But in fact many of them fail. This should not be surprising since often they are actually not ready mentally although they are physically ready.】,因果展开(2),例文分析 It is widely understood that to live independently requires a lot of energy and is not
7、easy at all.【In this twenty first century, because competition is increasing rapidly, people may need more and more preparation. An observation shows that many university graduates are unemployed. Therefore, they will not be able to support themselves.】,比较展开,比较展开,类比 一个原理或道理相似 的,读者更为熟悉 的不同类事物或现象(比喻)
8、对比 一个同类的对立面的事物或现象,类比展开,类比/比喻: Mathematical models of ecosystems likewise suggest that diversity does not guarantee ecosystem stability - just the opposite, in fact. A more complicated system is, in general, more likely than a simple system to break down.【A fifteen-speed racing bicycle is more likely
9、 to break down than a childs tricycle.】,类比展开,Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are busy doing too many things at a time, so they cannot do anything well.,类比展开,Concentration makes high efficiency.【According to the famous economics principle called “Allocation of
10、Labor“ that in the business field specification can create skilled workers, and thus increases the productivity. Similarly, if a person concentrates on one specific task, he/she is able to achieve better performance because he/she devotes him/herself into continuous hard work and avoids being distra
11、cted by other things.】,对比展开,不同事物比较(A和B比); 同一事物比较(有A和无A比/或称“拟无”) 衔接词:in contrast, otherwise, if not,对比展开(2),EXAMPLE Firstly, traveling with a group of people is more economical. It is because a group of travelers can get considerable discounts at airlines, hotels, restaurants and even tourist attract
12、ions and thus save lots of money. And the saved money can be used to buy more souvenirs for my family and friends. In contrast, if you travel alone you will have to pay full prices.,Admittedly, a sufficient medical care system is a high priority of any government. Medical care system, which is almos
13、t a hallmark of a civilized world, ensures people to pay their medical bills and get sufficient medical attention and treatment. Otherwise, disadvantaged people will find it very hard to afford medical bills. As a result, the government will lose its support of the people. And in the long term, the
14、societal stability will be at risk.,However, it does not follow that environmental protection has to take a second seat. A clean, agreeable environment is a prerequisite for the success of individuals and the country as a whole. If government fails to give it enough attention, dire consequences will
15、 follow. Global warming will continue to worsen, threatening to flood the Earth surface. The precious ozone layer will continue to be depleted, leaving gaping holes above the polar areas and thus leading to skin cancer.,对比展开(2),Which would you choose: a high-paying job with short hours that would gi
16、ve you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with long hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details.,In the first place, high pay means that I could provide a better life for my family a good home, plenty of f
17、ood, nice clothes, nice birthday presents and money for my childrens education.【These factors are more important than a few more hours a week to spend with family if it meant, for instance that I could not send my kid to a good school or pay for needed medical treatments.】,对比展开(2),Do you agree or di
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