如何提高中学生英语书面表达的能力.ppt
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1、如何提高中学生英语 书面表达的能力,苏州大学附属中学 黄丽艳,实际教学中学生在写作中经常出现的错误 教师在教学中的困惑 考纲上对写作的要求 我校高一、高二的具体做法 我校高三的具体做法 写作课实例,Volunteers make a difference!,一、实际英语教学中学生在写作时经常 出现的错误,一、实际英语教学中学生在写作时经常出现的错误,In recent years, there have been large numbers of volunteers devote their time and effort to people in need. In recent years
2、, a large number of volunteers devote their time and effort to people in need. The picture shows us a touching moment that two volunteers help a disabled man in a wheelchair. Only in this way can society be more harmony. As we can see in the picture, many volunteers help people who is disabled.,(dev
3、ote 改成devoting),(devote 改成have devoted),(that 改成when),(harmony 改成 harmonious),(is 改成 are),Unfortunately, there still exists a great many problems. As we can see in the picture that two volunteers are helping a disabled person to go upstairs. We should help the senior citizens in the House for the Ag
4、ed regular. Realize it would be impossible for the man to get to the top all by himself, the volunteers carry the wheelchair with difficulty step by step up the stairs. This picture reminds me many volunteers in my school, my community and our country.,(exists 改成exist),(that 改成 ,),(regular 改成regular
5、ly),(Realize 改成Realizing),(在me 后加of),2011年江苏高考书面表达,The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing
6、 whatever she could to let me have the best.,众所周知的是,随着人们生活水平的提高,汽车成了一种受欢迎的交通方式,给我们的生活带来了很多方便。 As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. a popular means of transport, which brings great
7、convenience to our life.,总结1,展示学生习作中的错误 让学生找出错误,并改正 联想相关的重点结构 利用好的结构让学生仿写或改写,二、老师们在英语课堂教学中经常遇到的困惑,1、如何让学生得高分? 2、如何避免书面表达中经常出现的一些低级错误? 3、如何让一些能力较弱的学生写出一些像样的句子? 4、如何让学生写出流畅的句子,而不是一些生搬硬套的短语的堆砌? 5、如何让整篇文章读起来通顺,流畅?,What makes a good article?,Beautiful handwriting Large vocabulary Various sentence structu
8、res Correct grammar Proper conjunctions ,How to write more beautiful sentences in our compositions?,(重庆卷) 学校网站新开设了一个“英语写作”栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括: 开设目的 栏目优势:教师在线(on line)指导等 作文要求:内容贴近学生生活 优秀作文的鼓励办法 邀请大家参与 注意: 词数100左右 开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数) Welcome to the column “writing
9、 English”!,Welcome to the column “English Writing”! Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing”, which provides students with the chances to post their compositions and communicate with each other . Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but
10、 also they can strengthen their self-confidence. The column has lots of advantages. It is the teachers guide on line that has the advantage over other columns .If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with professional teachers. It is required that the compositions should be rel
11、ated to the students life. Whats more, if it is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it . Hoping for the students participation.,Not only can students,定语从句,条件句和被动句,主语从句,So what advanced structures can we use when writing compositions? 1.非谓语动词( non-predicate verbs) (-ing,-ed,-to do)
12、 2.倒装句(inversion) 3.各种从句:(clauses) 名词性从句,定语从句,状语从句 4.强调句 (structure emphasis) 5.被动语态(passive voice),巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力,(一 ) 非谓语动词的使用 1.The bridge is being built in the town. The bridge will make the island a tourist attraction. (现在分词) 2. Successful business are those which are built around good personal
13、 relationships. (过去分词) 3. He wants to improve his spoken English. He often talks with the native speakers.(不定式),The bridge being built in the town will make ,Successful business are those built around ,In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with ,(二) 倒装句的使用,1. We can save the animals
14、 by changing the plants we eat. Only 2.She is clever but she never works hard. as 3. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the street,by changing the plants we eat can we save,Clever she is, she never works hard.,stands the clock tower.,(三)强调句的使用,1.The teachers
15、 words encouraged her greatly. (强调主语) 2.we have an easy access to the internet for information in the E-reading room(强调地点状语) (2006浙江),It was the teachers words that encouraged her greatly.,It is in the E-reading room that we have an easy access to the internet for information,(四)从句的使用,1.To our surpr
16、ise, he refused to take the position.(名词性从句) 2.When he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless.(比较状语从句) 3. We all know that the Beijing 2008 Olympic games is a great success. (非限制性定语从句),What surprised us was that he refused to take ,The higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt.,As is kn
17、own to us all, the Beijing 2008 Olympic games is a great success,1.We should take many measures to protect the earth where we live.,Many measures should be taken to protect the earth where we live .,(五) 被动语态,Lets practise,(福建) 目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现 英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文,标题是 “My Opinion on Cheating in Examinat
18、ions” 根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下: 主要原因 :考试偏多、偏难;不用功、懒惰;取悦 父母、老师 个人看法: 作弊不对;违反校规;要诚实,努力学 习; (其他方法) 注意:1.短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥 2.短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数 3.词数100左右. 4参考词汇:作弊 cheat 开头:It is known to us all that some students cheat in examination at school .,Now lets list some important points and discuss what comp
19、lex structures we can use,1、考试偏多、偏难 2、不用功、懒惰,There are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us.,Better: Sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.,We are lazy and dont work hard .,Better: Not only are some of the students lazy but they also dont work hard at
20、 their lessons.,Or: Some of the students dont work hard because they are lazy.,3、取悦父母、老师 4、作弊不对、违反校规 5、要诚实,努力学习,They want to please their parents and teachers.,Better:_ please their parents and teachers, they sometimes cheat when _ examinations.,In order to,taking,Cheating in examinations is wrong.
21、It breaks the rules of schools.,Better :It is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.,We students should be honest and study hard.,Better: _is to be honest and try to get good results by _instead of _ in examinations.,What we students should do,studying hard,cheating,总
22、结2,从范文入手,让学生获取好文章的信息 好文章所具备的一些要点 从要点分析让学生学会正确地表达 如何使学生进一步完善自己写的结构,三、考纲上对写作的要求,2012年江苏省考试说明上对书面表达的要求如下:要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等;提供情景的形式如图画、图表、提纲、信函等;考生应能:1)根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法,选用恰当的词汇;2)使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。,第五档作文-第三档作文的要求,第五档(21-25分):完全覆盖所有任务,完全达到预期写作目的,应用了较多语法结构和词汇,具
23、备较强的语言应用能力,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,内容连贯。 第四档(16-20分):较好地完成规定任务,达到预期写作目的,应用基本准确,应用简单的词语间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 第三档(11-15分):基本完成规定任务,整体达到预期写作目的,有一些词语和结构的错误,但不影响理解,应用简单的词语间的连接成分,是全文内容连贯。,2012年江苏高考作文,81. 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。,参考范文,Conflicts with oth
24、ers are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, which turned into a horrible quarrel. To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not ca
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