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1、Writing Skills & Practices,关于作文,作文占总分的10-15。 要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右(at least 120 words)的短文。 作文体裁主要包括:议论文、应用文、叙述文。,作文样题,Part I. Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Job. You should write at least 120 words and pay attention to the fo
2、rm of the letter. Your letter should include the following contents: 你为什么对经理助理这个职位感兴趣 你具备哪些能力以胜任这项工作,The form of the letter,1) The Heading (Date) (可省略) 2) The Greeting or Salutation (Dear Mr. Smith, Dear Mary, etc.) 3) The Body 4) The Complimentary Close (Best wishes, Yours sincerely, etc.) 5) The S
3、ignature,A Letter Applying for a Job,Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you the letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in China Daily for. As is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experience closely parallel your requirements.,A Letter Applying
4、 for a Job,I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an e
5、dge in the fierce competition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities, through which my teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.,A Letter Applying for a Job,I would li
6、ke to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 1234567 for further information. Thank you for your favorable consideration. Best wishes. Yours sincerely. Li Ming,作文样题,Part I. Writing (30
7、minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter to Apologize to your friend. You had an appointment with your friend on Sunday. Unfortunately you broke the appointment because your mother fell ill. Write a letter about 120 words to apologize for failing to keep the a
8、ppointment. Your letter should follow the outline given below: 就失约向你的朋友道歉 解释失约的原因 建议另外约定一个时间,Sample (A Letter to Apologize),Dear Mary, I am terribly sorry to say that I failed to keep the appointment that we made last Sunday. Now, I am writing to show my deep regret. Please accept my sincere apology
9、. I fear you are displeased at my absence that day. I hope you could understand me and forgive my failing to turn up.,Sample (A Letter to Apologize),Let me explain. The reason for my absence was that my mother fell ill that day. I had no way out because I had to send her to hospital and look after h
10、er. Therefore, I just couldnt meet you. Naturally, I want to suggest that we make another appointment. I shall be obliged if you would kindly write and tell me when and where you will be at convenience. We may meet again and I hope to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Liu fang,作文样题,Part I. Writing (30
11、minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Petroleum Crisis. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 我国石油需求量很大,石油供给形势严峻 出现这种情况有多种原因 说明你的看法,Traffic Regulations,A Typical Problem-Solution Pattern How do you outline
12、 your composition? Situation: Problems: Solutions:,(Sample),Petroleum Crisis In recent years petroleum consumption has got a rapid increase in China. What amazes us most is that our crude oil produced is far from enough to meet the market demands. It is true that we must find more petroleum for our
13、domestic market demands. There are many reasons that may explain the short supply of petroleum. The main reason is that the demands for petroleum continuously increase in China. Second, our crude oil resources are not rich enough to meet our own needs. Third, a large number of private cars are enter
14、ing Chinese families. As a result, we have to import crude oil from foreign countries such as Russia. Considering all these, we must find more energy for our economic development. For one thing, we may enlarge our oil imports. For another, we can create other energy substitutes. In conclusion, every
15、 Chinese should keep an eye on the petroleum problem.,(Sample),Petroleum Crisis In recent years petroleum consumption has got a rapid increase in China. What amazes us most is that our crude oil produced is far from enough to meet the market demands. It is true that we must find more petroleum for o
16、ur domestic market demands.,(Sample),There are many reasons that may explain the short supply of petroleum. The main reason is that the demands for petroleum continuously increase in China. Second, our crude oil resources are not rich enough to meet our own needs. Third, a large number of private ca
17、rs are entering Chinese families. As a result, we have to import crude oil from foreign countries such as Russia.,(Sample),Considering all these, we must find more energy for our economic development. For one thing, we may enlarge our oil imports. For another, we can create other energy substitutes.
18、 In conclusion, every Chinese should keep an eye on the petroleum problem.,Writing Skills,Lecture Series,1. 作文不理想的四个主要原因,第一. 英语底子太薄。 底子太薄主要表现为对语法知识掌握不牢及对基本词汇记忆不清。它包括定冠词和不定冠词的滥用,主谓不一致,单复数搞不清楚,时态和语态混乱及词语的各种形式掌握不牢。有的学生文章写得很长,字迹也很工整,但是读完之后只觉得思路紊乱,支离破碎,没有一个完整的句子,所以也就只能得两三分以慰劳苦。,1. 作文不理想的四个主要原因,第二. 词汇量太小,
19、且对已学词汇记忆不清。 除了底子太薄这个历史原因之外,学生词汇量太小也是一个不容忽视的原因。有的学生汉语功底很好,用汉语作文,他们就会思如泉涌,下笔千言,但是一到用英语作文就好像被缚住了手脚,不知如何下手。,1. 作文不理想的四个主要原因,第三. 缺乏思想,深度不够。 很多学生在作文当中所表现出的智力水平与阅历似乎只相当于一个初高中生。写出的文章着眼点低,视野狭窄。,1. 作文不理想的四个主要原因,第四. 缺乏应试技巧。 主要表现为有些学生在篇首或篇尾有喊口号倾向(如Dear Friends, lets ),或画蛇添足,本来文章该结束了却偏要罗罗嗦嗦再来两句多余的话;另外一些学生字数把握不准,
20、不是写得太短就是写得太长,写得太短的会因为字数不够而失分,太长的又因为阅卷老师任务繁重,时间窘迫,不能因为一篇文章乱了整个阅卷节奏。还有一些学生的笔迹(尤其是用纯蓝墨水钢笔和出水太浅的圆珠笔写的),让阅卷老师怎么也看不清楚。,2. 作文测试现场示范,Title: Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? Outline: 1.有些人认为数字会带来好运 。 2.而有些人则认为数字与运气无关 。 3.谈谈你的看法 。,2. 作文测试现场示范,第一步:审题(2分钟) 1. 题目:关于幸运号码与运气的关系 2. 三个段首句: A段. 指出第一种观点及其根据。
21、 B段. 指出第二种观点及其根据。 C段. 表明你的个人观点偏向(Y/N),2. 作文测试现场示范,第二步:布局(15分钟)(用英语思维) 1. 用英语铺设三个段首句: A段:Some people think numbers bring people good luck. B段:However, some others believe numbers have nothing to do with luck. C段:As for me, I dont think numbers will bring us good luck.,2. 作文测试现场示范,2. 列出三段各自框架及语言要点:(只写
22、出基本句型结构和句子主要素) A段:拓展句:A. Believe, there would be fate on numbers (phone numbers, lottery tickets, car number plates etc.) B. (Reasons) can avoid harm, enjoy good fortune. B 段:拓展句: A. Believe, the faith on numbers is groundless. B. One makes his own luck; fate is in the hands of a person.,2. 作文测试现场示范
23、,C段:拓展句:A. There is no necessary connection between numbers and luck. a. Numbers are only designed to distinguish things. b. The connection between numbers and luck is sheer coincidence. B. Good luck depends on some factors such as hard work and strong determination. 结尾句:I believe there are lucks so
24、metimes, but I simply dont relate luck to numbers.,2. 作文测试现场示范,第三步:行文。根据框架和要点,连字成句,连句成段,连段成章。(10分钟) (注意适当辅以连接词或转承语) 第四步:收笔。 通读全文,修改和润色(3分钟)。 写好作文的关键因素 语篇结构、套语、句型、用词、条理、语法。,作文结构示意图,题目: 段落I. 主题句 。 推展句1.(论据或例证,下同) 。推展句2. 。推展句3 。 结尾句1. (根据需要而定,可有可无) 段落II. 主题句 。推展句1. 。推展句2. 。推展句3. 。 结尾句1. (根据需要而定,可有可无) 段
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