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1、雅思写作idea之前加base 如同“睡席梦思床垫”,-澳洲游洋雅思学校 杨琳,在谈雅色变之前,我们关注一下中国近日来几大骇人听闻的社会新闻(并非与雅思无关,请您hold住)明星儿子轮奸,男子当街摔孩子,众多女童在校被性侵,如果你的鬼佬朋友当下问及为何中国现代社会大众行为卑劣发指,你的回答会是什么?,“中国这社会就这样了。”估计很多人先有类似感慨。没有人会挖空心思像在雅思考场一般找出三个idea,理论而空洞的加以论述-例如,家长太过宠爱,学校教育不够,社会网络,电影影响因素中国等等。,其实,雅思写作的idea定位也是如此,只是大家一味身在其中,就忘记了最为本能的也是最有说服力的观点。举个例子,
2、As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?(8月份澳洲和中国大陆写作预测考题)工作满意很重要,有什么因素增加满意?满意现实吗?,题目分析:满意不现实,因为“
3、经济现状很差,找个活就不容易了,经常是繁重的重复的,压力很大的,要求长时间甚至长旅程去工作。”这个思路是发自本能的正常人的想法。,示范:Hard economic realities mean that there is little choice in the kind of job a person can get. Many of them are doing arduous and repetitive tasks which may require longer hours and perhaps longer journey to work.,优势:一个理由段的压力只是借助了本能,
4、减轻了一大半的段落负担。不仅自己的思路顺畅,读者也会在社会现实的共识中,以及你的正确引导下看的舒舒服服。,所以,不要听信“中国人的逻辑和鬼佬完全不同,要用鬼佬逻辑全盘洗脑才能灭杀雅思”,这是谣言,这是惑众。,咱们再谈一例:In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?学校学生行为问题严重,什么原因?怎么解决?,题目分析:社会问题,因为“出生率下降,家庭越来越
5、小,孩子越来越少,父母当然宠孩子。但是却只是物质方面,因为父母要工作,没那么多时间陪孩子。好了,孩子想买什么买什么,想干嘛就干嘛,最后脑残了。”,示范:The birth rate is decreasing, so families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt not in terms of love and attention but in more materials ways. They are allowed to buy whatever they want regardless
6、of the price and to behave as they please. By this it means they grow up without being consideration of others or without much knowledge on where their standard of living comes from.,优势:此写法再也不必担心自己的思路混乱,表达没有逻辑,因为结局是由大渐小,由浅入深,如同一个完整故事一般逐渐感化考官读者的。温水煮青蛙大家都明白,那么,考场文章就不要心急与将水温立即升高,受惊吓的考官会纵身一跃,瞬间逃得远远的。,In
7、 many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?学生打工,我们一起再看几例,It is an unfortunate fact that many employe
8、rs may prefer to use the services of children simply to save money by paying them less than adults and it is this type of exploitation that should be discouraged.,Some people believe that childrens leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or d
9、isagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.,It is important to remember that children need to develop skills other than intellectual ones, and the best way to do this is through activities such as sports, games and playing with other kids.,Nowadays,
10、we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?,Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need
11、 it, first in the supermarket, and then at home.,Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.,Girls and boys learn to live and work together from an early age and are consequently not emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with the opposite sex.,课程提醒:每周四下午2:00pm(北京时间),4:00pm(墨尔本时间) 新浪微博:澳洲墨尔本游洋雅思学校 公众微信:mel_youyang 校官网(课件/录音)下载:www.globalielts.org.au(交流论坛),
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