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1、如何提高学生的书面表达能力,宁波七中 楼小燕,新课标对于学生的写作要求：,一根据写作要求收集，准备素材。 二能独立起草短文，短信等，并根据老师的要求进行修改。 三能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 四能简单描述人和事物。 五能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。,2011年宁波市英语中考评分标准,本大题总分为15分，按五个档次给分 第一档（1415分）能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 第二档（1113分）能写明大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文比较连贯，表达比较清楚。 第三档（810分）能写明部分要点，语言有较多错误，行文不太连贯，但尚能表达意思。 第四档（57分

2、）能写明少部分或个别要点，语言错误较多，只有个别句子可读、可看懂。 第五档（04分）基本上没有写出内容要点，语言错误多，只有一些词汇堆积, 不知所云。,去年英语满分作文。 Dear headmaster, Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often.

3、And our school will organize more out-class activities and give us more time for sports. It will be good for our health. And I also hope our school will organize fewer exams. We are all stressed out now. I hope our teachers will make classes more interesting. They will talk less but more clearly in

4、class. And I hope our teachers will finish classes on time. They will give us less homework. So that we can spend more time doing something that we are interested in. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours sincerely Liu Bo,如何谋篇布局,开头：开门见山 主体：枝繁叶茂 结尾：画龙点睛,开头：开门见山,1

5、）Junk food is bad for our health. 2）I think it is unnecessary for middle school students to take the mobile phones to school. 3）you asked me how to improve English, here are some tips.,主体：枝繁叶茂,确定文章所需用的时态。 仔细审题，不遗留要点。 主题句清楚、支撑句丰富，并能紧扣主题句。 I hope our school will give us more time for sports. Because i

6、t can keep us healthy. Whats more, it is helpful for our study. 注意句子与句子之间的连接，过渡要自然。 如果表达类似的意思，尽量用不同的句式，增强句子的表现力。 I like playing basketball. I also enjoy playing tennis. As for movies, action movies are my favorite.,结尾：画龙点睛,1) 可用简短的句子来结束文章，注意与文章主题的呼应，避免照搬前面的原话。 2) 画龙点睛，最好能对主体有所提升。如对未来的展望、号召正确的做法等。,对程

7、度较好学生的写作能力的提升,1. 多使用一些过渡性词语，会使得文章结构严密，增强说服力，感染力以保持行文的流畅。 2. 平时记忆一些常用的名言警句或俗语。 3适当使用一些从句，如宾语从句，定语从句，状语从句等。使文章上一个台阶。 4. 用多种表示法去表达同一种意思。 5. 完成后多检查，注意细节问题,多使用一些过渡性词语,1）并列递进： and, whats more, further more, moreover, besides, in addition 2）转折：however, but, nevertheless, after all 3）总结：in a word, finally,

8、at last, in brief, in short, on the whole, as you can see 4）强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all 5）对比：in the same way, just as, on the one hand, on the other hand 6 ) 因果：because, because of, since, so, thus, therefore，as a result 7) 列举：for example，such as. 8) 顺序：first, second, then, next,

9、 last, finally.,平时记忆一些常用的名言警句或俗语。,An apple a day, keeps the doctor away. Knowledge is power. All work and no play, makes Jack a dull boy.,用多种句式去表达同一种意思。,Reading is fun. Reading is enjoyable. Reading is a pleasure. Reading makes us happy. Reading offers us a lot of fun. We can get great fun by readin

10、g (from books). It is enjoyable for us to do some reading. Reading provides not only knowledge but also fun for us.,对于程度不好的学生的提升:,词汇积累（认知词汇量能拼写词汇量能写作用的词汇量写作时使用的高频词汇量）。 句式积累 行文的总体步骤：切题（准确）-内容（朴实）-句式（简单）-词汇（朴素）-细节（正确）。 可以适当背诵几篇范文，及常用例句。,作文的批改,全体批改 个别面批 同学互批 小组批改,注意学生在书面表达中经常出现的问题：,时态把握不准确。 They though

11、t doing homework can stop students playing computer games. 人称使用错误。 信息不全。 中文色彩浓厚。 细节错误。（名词单复数，冠词的使用，形容词于副词混淆，介词错用等） 拼写错误。 字数不足或者过多。 句子和句子之间没有适当的连接，比较孤立。,注意：(1)可以适当增加细节，要求意思连贯，语句通顺； (2)词数80左右；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 Last week our class had a parents meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whet

12、her doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful.,上星期，学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论。以下是你班家长的观点：多数家长认为作业多有好处，而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利。请你根据下面方框中的提示，用英语作一简要介绍并表明你自己的观点。,2009宁波中考英语书面表达,2010宁波中考英语书面表达 在今年的“地球一小时（Earth Hour）”活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自熄灯一小时，体现了低碳生活的新理念。假定

13、你是CCTV9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息用英语写一篇80个词左右的新闻稿。注意：部分内容已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Thank you for joining CCTVs Around China show! Now its 8:45 p.m. during the famous Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time. In Shanghai,_ _ Many people share with us their plans. _,20

14、11年宁波市英语中考书面表达（共15分） 为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是刘波，用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。注意：文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；不能出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our s

15、chool will_ Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Liu Bo,近几年来中考英语作文的趋势：,1. 突出开放性。 2. 突出时代性。 3. 突出实用性。 4. 突出教育性。,与学生学习生活相关的热点话题,环保题材：水资源，森林资源，节能减排，低碳出行等。 新生事物的评价：网络使用，网购，微博，微信等 与中学生学习生活有关的话题：人物、地方介绍，语言学习，人际交往，健康，烦恼，助人为乐，计划梦想等 关注热点事件和热点人物。,今年关注度比较高而且跟学生关系比

16、较紧密的热点,是否该帮助摔倒的老人 食品安全 绿色低碳 天宫一号 校车安全 云南旱灾 文明城市三连冠 ,例题： 今年宁波市在创建全国文明城市中勇夺三连冠。这不仅是所有宁波人的骄傲，同时也给了我们更大的动力，让我们做的更好。作为中学生，我们应该从我们身边事情做起，展现我们青春的风采。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右短文，谈谈怎样做个文明的中学生(开头已给出,不计字数)。 要点： (1) 尊敬长辈，团结同学； (2) 助人为乐，善待他人； (3) 遵守交规，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯； (4) 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等； (5) 补充两句个人观点。 参考词汇：respect(尊敬); obe

17、y(遵守); traffic rules（交通法规）; zebra lines(斑马线) 要求： (1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译； (2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 It is the third time Ningbo has won the honor of Civilization City in China. As students in Ningbo, what should we do to make our city more beautiful? _ Ningbo is our hometown, lets try our best to

18、make a better city and a better life.,Thank you for listening!,Dear headmaster, Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. I hope our school will

19、organize more after-class activities. I also hope our school will give us more time for sports, we will happier. We dont like exam, I hope school will organize fewer exams. For teachers, I hope teachers will make classes more interesting. They will talk less but clearly in class, finish classes on time. They will give us less homework. Too much homework make us have less free time. I dont like that. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours sincerely Liu Bo,