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1、海淀区高三年级 第一学期英语期末练习 作文分析,情景作文 (20分) 北京市政府发出限行通告规定私家车每周限制行驶一天。下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查结果。请根据下列图表提示,描述被调查者的不同看法,并简单谈谈你自己的观点。 注意: 1、文章的开头已为你写好。 2、词数不少于60。,审题 I. 审文字 北京市政府发出限行通告规定私家车每周限制行驶一天。下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查结果。请根据下列图表提示,描述被调查者的不同看法,并简单谈谈你自己的观点。 注意: 1、文章的开头已为你写好。 2、词数不少于60。,II. 审图,情景作文,Outline I. Many people supp
2、ort the restriction. relieve / reduce the present traffic pressure 60% improve the air quality 30% save energy 10% II. However, there are still many people who are against the new rule. inconvenient, cant drive their own cars more people buying a second car, cause heavier traffic III. My opinion: ef
3、fective way to deal with traffic problems,出现的问题,1. 信息有误。数字看错 25%的人们认为为出行带来不便 2. 层次不清楚,没有主题句。主旨与 细节混淆。 3. 个人观点不明确 In my opinion, the policy has two sides.,出现的问题,4. 句式 There are many people support the idea. 5. 关键词误用 inconvenient unconvenient relieve release energy resource / source,情景作文参考范文,Beijing g
4、overnment has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off roads one out of five workdays. A survey has been conducted about this issue on the Internet and the findings are as follows. Many people support the restriction. 60% of them believe that it relieves the present traffic
5、 pressure. And 30% think it helps improve the air quality. The rest of them, about 10% , consider it saves energy.,However, there are still many people who are against the new rule. About 75% among them think it inconvenient that they cant drive their own cars on a certain workday. 25% are worried that more people will buy their second cars, which may cause heavier traffic. In my opinion, the new traffic rule is really an effective measure to reduce traffic jams and air pollution.,
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