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1、高三英语写作训练,福州金桥高级中学 张滢,English Writing,Waving Flag,When I get older I will be stronger Theyll call me freedom Just like a waving flag And then it goes back (x3) Oh,lead-in,Born to a throne Stronger than Rome But violent prone Poor people zone But its my home All I have known Where I got grown Streets
2、we would roam Out of the darkness,I came the farthest among the hardest (survival) learn form these streets it can be bleak accept no defeat surrender retreat (so we struggling) fighting to eat (and we wondering),When well be free so we patiently wait for that faithful day Its not far away but for n
3、ow we say When I get older I will be stronger Theyll call me freedom just like a waving flag and then it goes back (x3) ahhho ahhho ahhho,so many wars settling scores bringing us promises leaving us poor I heard them say love is the way love is the answer thats what they say but look how they treat
4、us make us believers We fight there battles then they deceive us try to control us They couldnt hold us cause we just move forward just like buffalo soldiers (but we struggling),fighting to eat (and we wondering) when well be free so we patiently wait for that faithfully day Its not far away but for
5、 now we say When I get older I will be stronger theyll call me freedom just like a waving flag and then it goes back (3x) ahhhooo ahhhoooo ahhhooo,When I get older I will be stronger Theyll call me freedom Just like a waving flag And then it goes back (x3) Oh,and everybody will be singing it and you
6、 and I will be singing it and we all will be singing it woah woah woah when I get older I will be stronger Theyll call me freedom just like a waving flag (and then it goes back (3x),and then it goes When I get older I will be stronger Theyll call me freedom just like a waving flag (and then it goes
7、back (3x) a oh a oh a oh When I get older When I get older I will be stronger just like a waving flag (3x) flag(x2) just like a waving flag,Do you like this song? Why do you like this song? Because it makes me cheerful令人愉快的/pleasant快乐的/rhythmic有节奏的/wonderful美妙的/musical有音乐感的,Brainteaser,1.why does Ki
8、tty run as fast as a bus? 2.Peter has a dog but this dog never barks.Why? 3.Why does the dog sit under the big tree?,Because Kitty is in the bus .,Because it is a toy dog.,Because it doesnt want to become a hot dog.,Writing tips:,Decide tenses and personal pronouns. Draw an outline. Think about phra
9、ses/sentences patterns/proverbs /conjunctions just learned.,Para 1: Beginning 说出文中的要点,核心问题。,Para 2: Body 围绕主题,展开叙述、讨论。,Para 3: Ending 对全文的总结和概括。,提示作文,每个人都有自己的梦想,那么你的梦想是什么呢?请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇短文。 要求:1)内容切合题意,适当发挥,表达清楚,书写规范。 2)不少于80词,已给出的句子不计入总词数。 Everyone has his dream.,My Dream,Everyone has his dream
10、. So do I. Somebody want to be a nurse, somebody want to be a teacher. They all have their dreams. And I want to be a doctor. Maybe you will ask why. I can tell you . Because I want to save everybody life in the world. Maybe you will think it is impossible. But I think it will come true if I work ha
11、rd. Now, my main duty is to study hard so that I can become a doctor some day. Work hard , my dream will come true!,What do you think about this short passage? Do you have any ways to change them to make it more fluent?,wants,wants,the reason,everybodys,Working hard,范文 My Dream,(一)Everyone has his d
12、ream. My dream is to be a dancer when I grow up. I want to be a dancer because I like dancing very much. I think dancing can make me happy. Its not easy to become a dancer, so from now on I must study hard and try to learn more about dancing. And I also have to do lots of practice every day. I think
13、 if I put my heart into it, nothing is impossible. And I am sure I can be a famous dancer one day. (二)Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be an astronaut when I grow up. I want to be an astronaut because I am interested in science. If I become an astronaut, I can travel around the space and disco
14、ver the secrets in space. So from now on, I must study hard and try to learn more about science. And I need to exercise more to make me fit for his job. I think if I put my heart into it, nothing is impossible. My dream must come true.,Conjunctions,表示罗列增加 first, second, third, first, then/next, afte
15、r that/ next, finally 表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.nor 表示让步关系 though, although, even though, however 表示因果关系 because, because of, since, as, thanks to., so that, such that 表示举例 for example, for instance, such as.,请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文,陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由.短文须
16、包括以下内容:,1.大部分同学都反对兴建. 2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少, 但弊大于利. 3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染. 4.侵占学校部分操场.,注意:可以补充若干理由,不要仅 仅翻译以上各点.,词数:100-120.,practise,写作的步骤,1.根据文章提示在头脑中搜索你想用的 单词:,1.大部分同学都反对兴建. 2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少, 但弊大于利. 3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染. 4.侵占学校部分操场.,be against 反对,Most students of our school我们学校大部分同学,make a lot of money赚钱不少,弊大于利do m
17、ore harm than good.,Pollute vt.污染,take up 侵占,Playground n.操场,还有一些关键性短语补充:,采取措施 阻止不受 对造成伤害 做运动,take measures,prevent from,do harm to,have sports,2.想好开头句.提出观点。,including me, the construction ofa chemical factory near our school .,Most students of our school,are against,3.写好其它句子来支持你自己的 观点:,Although the
18、 factory will for our city , we do think it will us more than good. The air will be badly and we cant the noise entering our classrooms.,make a lot of money,do,harm,polluted,prevent,from, the building of it will a part of our small playground. We cant have enough place to play games and after class.
19、,take up,Besides,have sports,Of course, they have promised to to do it well, however, it is far from enough. ,We will never be able to breathe fresh air.,4.适当加上一些评论:,take measures,On the other hand,5.写出结尾句。,Where would we go if it were taken up ?,6.补充,完善,加上过渡词。,So we dont agree to build the factory here.,Homework,Recite the words and the phrases Review the tips of writing Finish the writing,Thank you !,
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