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1、市质检卷文本分析,2014.5,Qu Enshan, who used to study in Beijing No. 2 Middle School, went to study at the 122-year-old Hotchkiss School in Connecticut last September. Hed like to share his highs and lows with his peers (同龄人) in China who are considering studying abroad. When I got Hotchkiss offer last March
2、, I was overjoyed. I knew that I didnt have to choose between science and liberal arts. I want to be good at both, because I love the beauty of poetry and drama, I enjoy exploring the whys and ifs of history and Im attracted by the depth and width of chemistry and biology. This was the main reason I
3、 chose to study in the US. Hotchkiss sits between two lakes in the northwest Connecticut, with the nearest town miles away. There is no mobile phone signal on most of the campus and the Internet is turned off at midnight. My American peers work just as hard as Chinese high school students, but the s
4、chool offers many exciting after-class activities: the Fairfield Farm, which provides organically-grown food for the school dining hall, is one. The Hotchkiss farm was once part of a land donated by King George III of Britain. Like in other parts of New England, here the Puritans (清教徒) had to dig pi
5、les of rocks out of the land before turning it into fields available for farming. The most valuable lessons I learned from working on the farm were about Puritans beliefs, which formed the foundation of the United States: respect for hard work; encourage sweating in snow. Through farm work, I also h
6、arvested the spirit of teamwork, understanding biological and ecological issues, and broadly, the country and its people. At Hotchkiss, farming is listed together with sports as an after-class choice. If, like me, you are not an athletic person, and you dont want to choose sports such as football, g
7、olf or tennis, farm work is less demanding and a lot of fun, too. After all, the Hotchkiss philosophy(哲学)is: be yourself and follow your heart.,A篇,Briefly introduce the topic of the passage: Qu Enshan wants to share his experience with other Chinese teenagers. 简介本文主题:在美国求学的Qu Enshan想与中国的同龄人分享他的经历和感悟
8、。,Why he chose to study in the US 简介他选择去美国求学的主要原因,General information of Hotchkiss School and its after-class activities 简介Hotchkiss School的概况及其课外活动。,A special after-class activity: farming work 简介Hotchkiss School的一项特别的课外活动:农业课,并介绍自己在农业课上的收获。,The Hotchkiss philosophy Hotchkiss School的理念,Lead,details
9、,J.K. Rowling probably isnt going to write any more Harry Potter books. That doesnt mean there wont be any more. It just means they wont be written by J.K. Rowling. Instead theyll be written by people like Racheline Maltese, a fan of Harry Potter. Sometimes she writes stories about Harry and the oth
10、er characters from the Potterverse and posts them online for free. Maltese is a writer of fan fiction: stories and novels that make use of the characters and settings from other peoples professional creative work. The writers dont do it for money. They write it and put it up online just for the sati
11、sfaction. Right now fan fiction is still dark matter culturally: its largely invisible(看不见的)to the mainstream, but at the same time, its unbelievably massive. Fan fiction appeared earlier than the Internet, but the Web has made it much easier to talk and be heard. Theres fan fiction based on books,
12、movies, TV shows, video games, plays, musicals, rock bands, board games and even the Bible. In most cases, the quantity of fan fiction inspired by a given work is much larger than the work itself; in some cases, the quality is higher, too. Nobody makes money from fan fiction, but whether anybody los
13、es money on fan fiction is a separate question. Rowling has given Harry Potter her blessing. Other writers consider it a violation(侵犯)of their copyrights, and more, of their emotional claim to their own creations. They feel as if their characters had been kidnapped(绑架)by strangers. You can see both
14、sides of the issue. Do characters belong to the person who created them? Or to the fans who love them so deeply that they spend much time laboring to extend their lives, for free? This may seem unimportant in the first place, but it actually has huge influence on our culture and challenges just abou
15、t everything we thought about art and creativity: Is art about making up new things or about transforming the raw material thats out there?,Lead the topic: J.K. Rowling probably isnt going to write any more Harry Potter books, but they will continue to be written by other people an example of fan fi
16、ction.引出话题,以Racheline Maltese改写Harry Potter为例,介绍一种特殊的文学形式:fan fiction同人写作。,Why people write fan fiction 同人写作的目的,The arguments fan fiction has aroused. 同人写作引起的争议:角色归属权以及艺术是全新的创造还是对既有事物的改编,B篇,Lead,The situation of fan fiction and the sources of their writing 同人写作的现状及其创作来源,The attitudes of the writers
17、of the original works. 原创者对同人写作的态度,details,广告(略),C篇,General Electric uses detection and diagnostic(诊断)tools to proactively(主动地)identify faults in plane engines and repair planes efficiently. Those tools can also help facility managers to see energy-related problems. The smart building analytics mark
18、et is predicted to grow from $5.5 billion in 2012 to more than $18 billion in 2017, as more buildings both start using analytics and move to advanced technologies. The starting point for most will be reporting dashboards(仪表盘), allowing facility managers to view building data. The next add-on is alar
19、ming capabilities, including those fault detection and diagnostics systems GE uses. Lastly are the proactive analytics, which bring in data from inside a building such as the number of rooms that are lived in, along with outside data such as weather conditions, to advise what managers should do or e
20、ven take actions on their own. These tools vary in their abilities. For example, if a piece of equipment is calling for both heating and cooling simultaneously, a fault is likely involved, said Scott Herman, product development director for Johnson Controls. Using applications within a system such a
21、s Johnson Controls Panoptix, a facility manager could create a rule that identifies any heating and cooling at the same time as a fault and take action when that fault comes up. Beyond simple rules, Herman said that analytics can go so far as to learn how a piece of equipment or building behaves, an
22、d identify faults or problems. In the first 120 days of using a Johnson Controls application, Western Kentucky University identified a number of faults that, once handled, allowed it to create more comfortable learning environments and recover its investment in less than six months, Herman said. In
23、addition, analytics can model possibilities. For example, if a facility manager wanted to pre-cool buildings, he could model out how much energy or money would be saved by cooling the building early in the day, then turning off coolers during peak(高峰)energy load times. Along with modeling energy use
24、, analytics could also predict how those changes would affect tenants(房客)comfort levels.,GEs detection and diagnostic tools can also help facility managers to see energy-related problems.引入话题:通用检测和诊断飞机故障的工具也可用于帮助楼宇管理人员解决能源问题。,Market potential of the smart building analytics智能楼宇分析系统的市场前景,Introduce th
25、e function of the smart building analytics by telling the readers how the analytics deal with the fault in the heating and cooling system.以智能楼宇系统处理空调系统故障为例说明该系智能应用的功能。,A successful example of using the analytics智能系统应用成功的一个例子。,Analytics can model possibilities.该智能系统能自动模拟各种可能性,帮助楼宇管理人员制定更合理节能的用电计划,同时又
26、不减少住户的舒适度。,D,introduction,elaboration,The three tools of the smart building analytics组成智能楼宇分析系统的三种工具,When Danny Bowman was at school, he spent 10 hours a day taking more than 200 selfies(自拍)trying to find the perfect image. But his addiction, which began at the age of 15, caused him to drop out of s
27、chool and lose almost 12.7kg in weight. He would take 10 photos of himself before he washed and would slip out of class three times every hour. At 16, he dropped out of school so he could focus on his addiction, and his diet began to get worse. He did not leave his house in Newcastle for six months,
28、 and when he failed to take the perfect shot, he tried to kill himself by taking drugs. His mother, Penny, managed to save him, but he was forced to seek help after his addiction had gradually become out of control. The 19-year-old, believed to be Britains first selfie addict, has now had therapy(疗法
29、)to treat his technology addiction, and Body dysmorphic disorder an over anxiety about personal appearance. He has not taken a picture of himself in seven months, and has realised that achieving perfection is impossible. He told the Sunday Mirror: “I was constantly in search of taking the perfect se
30、lfie and when I realised I couldnt I wanted to die. I lost my friends, my education, my health and almost my life.” “The only thing I cared about was having my phone with me so I could satisfy the urge to capture a picture of myself at any time of the day.” He would look at photos of his “idol”(偶像)L
31、eonardo Di Caprio and would then replicate his poses(姿势). Dannys dream was to become a male model. The selfie craze has grown in past five years, with stars, politicians and even Pope(教皇)Francis posting getting involved in the sensation. But one psychologist at a clinic where Danny was treated said
32、the addiction with taking selfies has now become a mental illness. Now determined to raise awareness of the anxiety disorder, Danny is working with Fixers a national charity helping young people “to fix the issues that matter to them”. He said their help has kept him alive and called on others to se
33、ek help before they end up in hospital.,Introduce Danny Bowman, a teenager dropout who was addicted to taking selfies and almost killed himself.介绍一个酷爱自拍并为此退学、差点自杀的青少年。,The treatment Danny received and his self narration of his symptom. Danny接受过的治疗和效果,以及他对自己症状的描述。,E篇,introduction,body,Danny is not alone in taking selfies. 自拍已成潮流,许多名人也爱自拍。,Happy ending,Danny is working with a national charity helping young people. Danny治愈后与慈善组织合作,帮助其他青少年克服各种心理障碍。,
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