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1、四级写作模板班 北京新东方学校 石雷鹏,石雷鹏: http:/ TOEFL、IELTS、 考研、 四六级写作,Mini-test:你的水平 首先,我祝愿大家更快乐,更健康。 Above of all I congrataulate all the students to happier than before, body is healtier.,First, I wish all students are happier and healthier.,如何涨分?,自己写的内容:保分,背诵的内容:涨分,四级写作和翻译占总分20%,满分为142;其中写作15%,满分为106.5,课程目标: 从“
2、蔡少芬” 到 “贝多芬” 70分 90分,2011年12月四级写作复习重点:,2005年12月-2011年6月 1. 议论文:11次 2. 应用文:2次 3. 图表作文:0次,课程介绍:四个板块 1. 四级写作最有效复习方法 2. 考试概况 3. 功能段落模板及例题分析 4. 应用文和图表模板,关于模板那点事!,摈弃传统模板: 问题:张同学 模板,用还是不用?困惑,功能模板的概念:,提纲 功能段落 四级考试一般有三个提纲,可以总结为六种功能段落。因此,掌握好六种功能段落,也就掌握了所有作文的写作。,2011年6月大学英语四级考试真题,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Di
3、rections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2. 网上购物有很多好处, 但也有不少问题 3. 我的建议,2010年12月大学英语四级考试真题,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions:For this part, you are
4、allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应该,2010年6月19日大学英语四级考试试题,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed
5、30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2. 出现这种情况的原因 3. 为了改变这种状况,我认为,2009年12月大学英语四级考试,Part Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed
6、30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 建设绿色校园很重要 2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境 3. 为了建设绿色校园,我们应该,2009年6月英语四级考试,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a sh
7、ort essay on the topic of Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow: 1. 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么? 2. 也会带来一些问题 3. 你的看法?,段落层面:六种功能段落,1. 现象描述 2. 危害分析 3. 原因分析,4. 建议措施 5. 观点阐述(利弊) 6. 意义阐述,篇章层面:六种功能段落的排列组合,1. 问题解决型:2010年6月 2. 观点对比型(利弊分析):2011年6月 3. 现象阐述型
8、:2009年12月,请区分以下提纲所对应的功能段落 2008年12月:Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题 3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义,2008年6月,Recreational Activities 1. 娱乐活动多种多样, 2. 娱乐可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性, 3. 作为大学生,我的看法。,2007年12月,What Electives to Choose 1.各大学为大学生开设了各种各样的选修课 2.学生出于各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3.以我自己为例,总结复习:,1. 现
9、象描述 2. 危害分析 3. 原因分析,4. 建议措施 5. 观点阐述(利弊) 6. 意义阐述,写作概况:,1. 试题形式(考场注意事项) 2. 评分方法(高分作文要求) 3. 评卷实例(高分模版思路),答题卡1: Part I Writing (30 minutes) Part II Reading Comprehension (Skimming and Scanning) (15 minutes),试题形式:,Writing:2008年12月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short ess
10、ay on the topic of Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow: 1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛地使用 2.造成的问题 3.限制使用的意义,笔记,审题关注: 英文指令:题材+话题 汉语提纲:识别提纲功能 字数:至少120,最好140-150, 若题目读不懂:英文题目+汉语提纲,写作概况:评分方法,1.Global scoring 2.Rewarding score 原始赋分:满分15分 标准分:1
11、07分 五个分数档次:0、2、5、8、11、14,写作概况:评卷实例,0分:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。 5分:基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多严重错误。 14分:文章切题。文字通顺,条理清楚,无重大语言错误,仅有个别小错。,评卷实例:请思考高分作文特征,实例一 英文题目:BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China,汉语提纲: (1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及 (2)和汽车的比较 (3)自行车在中国的前途,模版的提炼过程:思路和表达,Bicycles are very popular in Chi
12、na. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.,单复数错误:man and woman men and women 词性误用:old and youn
13、g the old and the young 专有名词:第一个和最后一个单词首字母大写,其他:实词(名动形副代数)首字母大写;虚词(介连冠)首字母不大写。,首句模板句式提炼:Bicycles are very popular in China. 词性转化:popular popularity. In China, bicycles have gained great/wide popularity among Chinese people.,练习:(请暂停完成以下真题句子写作:铅笔) 2011-06:现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2010-06:如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2009-1
14、2:建设绿色校园很重要 2009-06:越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么? 2008-12:一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样,2011-06:现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 In the recent decade, online shopping has gained wide popularity among youngsters.,2010-06:如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However, ,2009-12:
15、建设绿色校园很重要 In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges.,2009-06:越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么? In the present-day society, free admission to museums is enjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.,2008-12:一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 During the pas
16、t decades, disposable plastic bags gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.,2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样 In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity among individuals.,此外,,简单句(Bicycles are very popular in China. ) 长难句?,我爱记歌词 In my eyes, you are the most
17、beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you.,高分句式: 双重否定 结构:No _ is/are more _ than _. 原句:Bicycles are very popular in China. In China, no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles.,我能想到最浪漫的事就是和你一起变老。,二句模板句式提炼:Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles
18、. 调查法描述:Based on a recent report, a majority of Chinese families in the cities acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles.,练习: (请暂停:在完成首句之后,对以下现象进行描述) 2011-06:现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2010-06:如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2009-06:越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么? 2008-12:一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样,2011-06:现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 Base
19、d on a recent report by China Daily, 72.34% of young people reckon that they have purchased clothes, books and other items on Taobao, Dangdang, Amazon and Group-buying websites.,2010-06:如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 However, according to a recent survey, a great many learners admit that they pay less attention
20、to words spelling.,2009-06:越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么? Based on an investigation, a majority of visitors reckon that by visiting museums freely, they acquire rich knowledge on history, military and customs.,2008-12:一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 As a recent reports reveals, a majority of residents acknowledge that they hav
21、e been using these bags to take food, books and many other goods.,2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样 According to a recent survey, a majority of folks admit that they participate in more recreational activities: traveling, sports, watching TV or movies and surfing the Internet.,三句提炼:During the rush hour, you can see
22、 that thousands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. 模板句式:During the rush hour, it can be noticed that thousands of people men and women, the old and the young- ride bicycles to work and study.,练习: (请暂停:在完成前两句之后,描述以下话题现象) 2011-06:现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 Every day,
23、it can seen that thousands of people men and women, the old and the young shop online to buy various goods.,2009-06:越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么? On the weekends, it can noticed that hundreds of people men and women, the old and the young visit museums to see the exhibits.,首段现象描述(正面),In China, bicycles have
24、 gained great popularity among Chinese people. Based on a report, a majority of residents in the cities acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, it can be noticed that thousands of people men and women, the old and the young- ride bicycles to work and study.,Compared w
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