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1、Academic Writing Task 1,宁柏宇 北京新东方学校 国外考试部英联邦项目,2,IELTS Writing,Saturday / Thursday Morning 3rd paper Test,3,Question Booklet,Task 1 Report (Academic) / Letter (General) 150w, 20m Task 2 Essay 250w, 40m,4,Writing Booklet,Writing Booklet ningboyu_ Password: ieltswriting Pencil and Eraser,5,Scoring,Exa
2、miner Task 1 and 2 : 0 - 9 Writing Band T1 * 1 / 3 + T2 * 2 / 3 6 6.5 Overall Band,6,Requirement,Academic Overall Score Language School 5.5 Undergraduate 6 Graduate 6.5 Famous Universities + 0.5 Popular Majors + 0.5,7,8,9,Registration,Objective An acceptable score within the shortest time The earlie
3、r, the more choices ! No deadline, no completion !,10,Registration,Self-Analysis NCEE 100 4.5 NCEE 130 or CET-4 425 5.0 CET-4 600 or CET-6 425 5.5 CET-6 600 or NETEM 70 6.0 4hrs / day, 1 point / per 2 months,11,Considerate IELTS,Test as often as possible Reschedule ( + 500 RMB) Refund ( - 750 RMB),T
4、eaching Material, 雅思写作胜经、群言出版社,12,13,Task 1 - Question Grouping,Figure (75% 2008Q1) Multiple / Single Non-Figure (25% 2008Q1) Flow chart / Map,14,Writing Procedure,Read + Plan (3 mins) Write (16 mins) Check (1 mins),15,Read,Words: paragraph 2 Pictures: Words (title, legend, axis) Number (unit, digit
5、) Make notes on the question booklet !,Numbers,10 million / millions thousands of millions of billions of,17,Scoring Criterion,TA : Content CC : Structure LR : Words GRA : Sentences,18,Marking Criterion,UNDERLENGTH NO OF WORDS PENALTY OFF - TOPIC MEMORISED ILLEGIBLE,19,Plan - Content,Summarize Featu
6、res, not list data a1, a2, a3, , an Trend Max / Min Slope A, B, C, Max / Min,20,Paragraph 3,Comparisons within the chart or between the charts Select Main Features (recreates the picture in the examiners mind) Supporting Data Report facts, not opinions,21,Plan - Structure,Paragraph or not? reader fr
7、iendly How to Paragraph? A new idea, a new paragraph Introduction / Conclusion (if needed),22,Thinking Style,23,Paragraphs,Multiple Charts Introduction Chart 1 Chart 2 Comparison Single Chart Introduction Feature 1 Feature 2 Conclusion (if needed),24,Plan - Structure,Linking Devices (LD) Between par
8、agraphs Between features Within sentences,25,Language Requirement,Word Correct spelling enviroment / environment Word Level get / achieve a band 8 Word Variety (Avoid repetition) a good / well-paid / satisfactory / decent job,26,Sentence,Grammatical Accuracy There is a boy asks you out. Sentence Len
9、gth Band 9 : 20+ Band 7 : 15 Structure Variety A new challenger comes here. Here comes a new challenger.,27,Word & Time,Multiple / Single Charts Intro. / Intro. (30w, 1s) Chart 1 / Feature 1 (50w, 4s) Chart 2 / Feature 2 (50w, 4s) Comparison / Conclusion (30w, 1s),Paragraph 2 Copied phrases will not
10、 be counted Paraphrase the rubric,Introduction,chart = graph = diagram line, curve bar, column pie table = figures = statistics Save below,Word (B - 78),give information about reveal indicate demonstrate Simple Present Tense,Word,the UK Britain most popular favorite / fashionable / stylish country n
11、ation,Word,UK residents to visit UK travelers / visitors / tourists Specific in 1999,Passive Voice The chart shows A. (do) A is shown by the chart. (be done) The line chart reveals visits to and from the UK. Visits to and from the UK are revealed in the line chart.,Structure Variety,The line chart r
12、eveals , and the bar graph indicates The line chart reveals , and are indicated in the bar graph.,Compound Sentence,Introduction,The line chart reveals visits to and from Britain and UK travelers top 5 favorite nations in 1999 are indicated in the bar graph.,Linking Devices,Between paragraphs (B - 7
13、8) According to the chart, line chart upper / lower chart chart 1 chart of visits to and from the UK,Between Features (B - 51),also / besides / on the other hand but / however / conversely while / in particular,Basic Structure 1,The visits increased greatly (1) (2) (3) from about 12 to 57 million (4
14、) from 1979 to 1999. (5),(1) Subjects,Legend visits abroad by UK residents Paragraph 2 travel from the UK Synonyms UK visitors / travelers / tourists,(1) Subjects,it / they The visits increased from 1979 to 1999. In particular, they increased most quickly from 1985 to 1988.,(2) Verbs,increase : decr
15、ease / rise : fall go up : come down climb : slide ascend : decline rocket : collapse,(2) Verbs,Tense increased increase is expected / predicted to increase,(3) Adverbs,sharply / rapidly / swiftly slowly / gradually / tardily greatly / vastly / considerably slightly / marginally / minutely,(3) Adver
16、bs & (4) Numbers,about / around / roughly / more or less from about 12 to 53 million,(5) Time,from 1979 to 1999 between 1979 and 1999 during the 20 years / two decades starting from 1979,Chart 1 (Band 6.5),According to the line chart, visits abroad by UK residents increased from about 12 to 57 milli
17、on from 1979 to 1999. While, overseas travelers to Britain went up from about 10 to 27 million. It is obvious that UK tourists were more and climbed faster than overseas ones during the period.,Basic Structure 2,There was a sharp increase in the visits (3) (2) (1) from about 12 to 53 million (4) fro
18、m 1979 to 1999. (5),Basic Structure 3,A sharp increase was seen in (3) (2) (6) the visits from about 12 to 53 million (1) (4) from 1979 to 1999. (5),48,A sharp increase (2)&(1), (6),a sharp / slow / great / slight increase an upward / rising / increasing tendency a downward / falling / decreasing tr
19、end show / prove / witness,(2) Verb,keep / remain unchanged / constant / stable fluctuate upward / downward double / triple / quadruple,Chart 1,According to the line chart, both UK tourists abroad and overseas ones to the UK went up from 1979 to 1999 and the former climbed more markedly than the lat
20、ter. In 1979, UK visitors were only around 2 million more than their overseas counterparts, being approximately 12 and 10 million respectively. However, two decades later, they almost doubled the foreign travelers to Britain (roughly 53 and 27 million separately).,Chart 2 (Band 6.5),The bar graph de
21、monstrates that the most UK visitors went to France and Spain, which were 11.0 and 9.5 million. Also, many British travelers were attracted by the USA(4.0 million), Greece(3.5 million) and Turkey(2.0 million).,Chart 2,The bar graph demonstrates that France and Spain were the favorite countries for U
22、K tourists in 1999, which attracted around 11.0 and 9.5 million UK visitors respectively. Remotely following were the USA, Greece and Turkey with 4.0, 3.5 and 2.0 million travelers separately.,Comparison (band 6.5),What is also worth mentioning is that almost 40% UK tourists selected France and Spai
23、n in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.,Comparison,What is also worth mentioning is that France and Spain alone accounted for almost 40 percent of UK tourists abroad in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.,Professional English, www.guardian.co.uk thestreet TV,Che
24、ck,Sample Answer (I4 - 168) Script Comment Script Corresponding,Comment,TA Under length & dollar No comparison CC No reference LR & GRA Narrow sentence type Basic errors,I4 - 54,demand used / need / requirement / consumption typical average / representative use consume home household / family passiv
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