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1、几个小提醒,15周:交快速阅读; 15周周六12月17日全国大学英语四级考试,带齐该带的物品。 16周:开始第8单元;每组交至少2次小组活动的文字资料。,1、结构:审题与列提纲或者打腹稿的重要性; 2、连接与过渡:段间、句间与句内均非常重要; 3、提炼句子:平时多学习模仿书本以及课后学到的长句子、好句子; 4、注意用词:换用关键词,尽量不重复;应用具体生动代替笼统乏味的词汇。,对策,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,The icemen, like blacksmith only survive in literature.,Before
2、we catch our breath, the space age arrived.,Every idea gives birth to new ones, and each of them has a dozen of children.,送冰的人就像铁匠一样只有在文学作品中还能读到。,我们尚未有喘息的机会,太空时代便到来了。,每一个想法都引发很多新的想法,继而引发更多的想法。,There is a limit to everyones ability to adapt.,It is a method that ignores religion, race, nationality, ec
3、onomics, morality, and ethics.,人的适应能力是有限的。,这是一种无视/超越宗教、种族、民族、经济、道德和伦理的方法。,All we need to do is lower the cost of converting sea water into fresh water.,我们所要做的就是降低把海水转变成淡水的成本。,Science would lead them to a new era of endless prosperity and happiness.,科学将带领他们进入一个无限繁华无限幸福的新时代。,措词炼句(二),掌握“三要素”,写出精彩句。,在基本
4、句子的基础上添加上一些从属结构,这些结构分别表示 三个方面的内容,称为“三要素”。 性质要素:对所描述的东西进行总的定性、评价等。形容词、副词、介词短语、分词短语等可以充当此类要素。 细节要素:描述一个事物的具体方面。分词短语、介词短语、数量词、独立主格结构等常被用来充当细节要素。 比较要素:通过比较、联想等,进一步确定该事物的性质。like、as等词及while从句、定语从句等常可担当比较要素。,以下面三个句子为例,你怎样通过增添“三要素”使其表达内容丰满? 1. Students sat in the classroom. 2. E-mails connect friends. 3. We
5、 have facts.,掌握“三要素”,写出精彩句。,1. These curious students sat in the classroom, 性质要素 listening to their teacher attentively, like a group of soldiers. 细节要素 比较要素 2. As a bridge, e-mails connect intimate(亲密的) friends 比较要素 性质要素 when they are apart. 细节要素 3. We have sound facts based on reality, 性质要素 细节要素 wh
6、ile they have groundless rumors(谣言) based on illusions. 比较要素,以下是增添后一种可能的写法,请比较。,在语法正确的基础上,灵活使用“三要素”扩句能使 句子更准确、更地道、更高效。 提示:精彩句并非每句均包含“三要素”,当用一个或 两个要素足以表达准确、丰满时,不必为了凑 够“三要素”而画蛇添足。,具体的一些技巧,1. 适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的 反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I 。,eg. We should pay attention to this problem.,Attention should be paid
7、 to this problem.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,所以,我们应该采取一些有效的手段。这样,我们才能增强服务行业的竞争能力。,Now you try,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,So we should adopt some effective ways and in this way we can enhance the competitiveness of the service industry.,It is, therefo
8、re, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively in the wake of the enhancement.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连 接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放 在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分 别加上逗号。,例如
9、:however / therefore / for example / I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。,eg. Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代 替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等),eg. Many people think we should s
10、tudy hard.,A vast majority of college students take it for granted that study should be taken seriously.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,I never forget the very exciting day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which attracted me a lot, so I searched a
11、 lot of useful information I had expected, and enjoyed many wonderful classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,我从来没有忘记令人激动的那天,我母亲给我买来电脑作为我的生日礼物。我深深地被它所吸引,于是搜索大量我想要的有用信息,听了好多古典音乐。那晚,我一夜无眠,感觉整个世界属于我了。,Now you try,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE
12、.,I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me, so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleep
13、less, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,新世纪的到来使计算机越来越流行。随着科学技术的发展,计算机进入当今社会,已成为一种时尚,并且吸引着越来越多的人。毫不夸张地说,我们已经大规模地被这股潮流所淹没。,Now you try,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。Laura Lv Qingxia from ZUFE.,Youd better say,The dawn of the new century witnesse
14、d the increasing popularity (more and more popular ) of computers. Coincident with (with) the advancement (development) of science and technology, computers pouring into / flooding into/ swarming into (entering into) the current (now) society as a fashion are appealing to (attracting) growing indivi
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