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1、新东方在线 2010同等学力英语网络课堂电子教材系列 基础班写作2010同等学力英语基础班写作讲义主讲:王兆飞欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材目 录第一部分 写作试题简介(1)第二部分 写作评分实例(2)第三部分 写作常见错误分析(4)第四部分 写作相关语法讲练(10)第五部分 段落写作练习(69)第六部分 篇章写作练习(79)附录:写作练习答案(87)85新东方在线 2010同等学力英语网络课堂电子教材系列 基础班写作第一部分 写作试题简介一、写作试题要求根据同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语水平全国统一考试大纲(2008年11月第五版)的规定,考生应具有用英语书面表达思想的基本能力。写作部分设一题
2、,15分。考试时间为30分钟。要求考生在规定的时间内按照题目要求用英语写出一篇不少于150个词的短文,考试形式为根据提纲作文、看图作文、描述图表或根据一篇所给文章写出内容提要或读后感等。二、写作评分原则本考试的作文采取总体评分(Global Scoring)的方法,即在批改作文时,评卷人员根据思想内容和语言表达的总体印象给出奖励分(REWARD SCORES),并不是按语言点错误的多少扣分。批改作文时,主要从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,和语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍有密切的关系。
3、因此写作评分标准主要围绕四个方面:(1)内容切题;(2)能正确表达思想;(3)意义连贯;(4)无重大语法错误。避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括0分,一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。三、写作评分标准1本题满分为15分。2阅卷标准分五等:2分, 5分, 8分, 11分, 14分。 各有标准样卷一至二份。3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分。4评分标准:2分条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言
4、错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。注: 白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。5字数不足应酌情扣分累计字数1401491301391201291101191001099099808979扣 分12345679注:如题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数。 6试卷二(包括英译汉、汉译英和写作)总分达不到18分者,不论试卷一得多少分,均按不及格处理。第二部分 写作评分实例Directions: For this part,
5、 you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。2. 诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。It Pays to Be HonestIn our modern social life, there are many examples
6、around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kinder
7、garten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends wil
8、l never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again. So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social. Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For exampl
9、e, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams. Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. B
10、y contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends wit
11、h them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should b
12、e honest.With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly. Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled
13、goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has goo
14、d quality. From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our c
15、ountry will be beautiful and wealthy. Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming. We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the mone
16、y box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others. I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us
17、 to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you are good people. But if you dont be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are wa
18、nt to be a good people, remember honest first. Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment;
19、 and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients health, even their life. Seeing this situation. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will m
20、ake others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmony. So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do w
21、ithout honesty.第三部分 写作常见错误分析一、语法错误:(一)句子结构错误1主从句叠置1) There are more and more people like to chat on the Internet. 2) But there are still many problems should be noted and resolved.2 简单句叠置1) I like dancing very much, I go to dance every weekend.2) I have 2 more years before graduation, by then I shal
22、l have reached my goals.3 从句叠置As is known to all of us that science and technology play an important role in the development of society.4句子成分缺失1) If work hard, we will surely be successful.2) Everywhere can find skyscrapers and flyovers in Beijing today.3) The apples five dollars per kilo. / This gi
23、rl very beautiful.4) Finally, the service. The canteen staff arent patient enough when serving us.5) This picture is so attractive that the more I look, the more I like.6) She closed eyes and put hands into his.(二)动词形式错误1时态错误1) However, we are also faced with a lot of problems. For example, it seeme
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