英语六级写作.ppt

六级英语写作技巧 使文章有亮点 从历年CET6书面表达高分文章来看， 每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句 或段落安排上都有独到之处。 要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的 基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮 ”点。 一、词汇选择标新立异 在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使 用大纲上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变 化来的新词、使用同（近）义词或反义词等来 代替常见词语。 1）这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。 A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street. 分析：is in是常见词语，而situates in则 是大纲上没有的，属于高级词汇。 2）在周末我们做很多作业。 A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do. 分析：B句在表达时没有使用过于 直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。 endless就是由大纲词汇end加后缀 -less变化来的。 3）洗澡间和厨房都很好。 A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good. B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished. 在表达要点时，B句使用了well- furnished，这比good语气强，也显得 生动。 在造句时，“较高级词汇”如能运用 贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个， 也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 二、结构造句与众不同 在造句时，既要使句子生动，又要 使其简明扼要。 1.使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提 倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句 子更受欢迎。 1）唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发 生过一次大地震。 A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s. B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s. 大多数同学使用了there be结构， 这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式 ，另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语” 结构，且使用了terrible，hit/strike这 样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。 2）你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收 到了。 A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式) B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与 多数人使用的方式不同,简洁) 2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒 装句等，增强语句的表现力。如： 3）阿福救了我妹妹。 A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式) B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.( 强调句式) 4）我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高 兴. A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句) B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句) 3.句式多样，复杂得体。在写作中应避 免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意 句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、 并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句 等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分 词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句 简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构 ，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的 特色（请同学们自己分析）。 5）这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里 面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里 有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。 A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well. B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 三、布局谋篇独具匠心 在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或 其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使 主题突出，结构严谨,我们应注意学习和 使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。 （省略） Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low. 1）该部分使用Opinions are divided. 作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均 使用了主题句，使整体结构紧凑，表达 严谨。 2）在表述要点时范文还对要点出 场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应 收门票，但不宜过高“，前部分作为主题 句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句 末：They suggested，however， fees should be charged low.这样就分 清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。 3）范文使用了and，what is more， however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand（说明前后两个观点是 相悖的），这些连接手段的运用加强了 句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表 达连贯，浑然一体。 4）范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原 因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间 缺少连贯性的常见方法。 总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引 读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词 、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处 特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do We Need “Never give up“ ? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1“永不言弃”一直被认为是一种积 极的生活态度，是个人成功的关键因素 2但是，也有人认为适当的放弃才 是明智的选择 3你对此的看法及理由 Do We Need “Never give up“? 【审题】本题要求写一篇议论文，属 观点论证型作文。根据所给提纲，本 文应包括以下内容：提出“永言不弃” 的观 提出自己的看法和理由；总结全 文。 引用 【思路一】第一段指出人们对待“ 永不言弃”的不同态度； 第二段给出你对这一问题的看法 及理由：需要学会适时放弃； 第三段重申你的看法，进行总结 。 【范文】 Do We Need “Never give up”？ It is widely accepted that “Never give up”，a strong and positive life attitude ，is the key for individual success on the grounds that permanent persistence may boost our confidence, strengthen our will，and provide us a second chance for success when we are in hardshipHowever，others argue that sensible abandonment is more precious than blind persistence because the wise one should choose the most suitable area for himself herself In my opinion，we need to learn to give up timelyThe most immediate reason is that we should adjust our aim carefully in order to go ahead continuously Sometimes，to give up those unrealistic targets is essential for successBesides，the attitude “Never give up” exhausts us both mentally and physicallyOnly through learning to give up call we lead a pleasant and relaxing life. Finally，a temporary comprise means a new start，a beginning bringing new hopes，expectations and opportunities for usPassive as giving up sounds，It represents a more mature and realistic mentalityIf those opposing this attitude can take its benefits into considerationthen this may seem acceptable m our lives