复件高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导.ppt

高考英语开放作文指导,Describe a picture,Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life,Give your own comment/suggestion/solution,Structure,漫画的画面 细节 漫画的夸张 寓意 (与现实的矛盾之处）,细节,夸张,寓意,Dont copy others way of solving the problem. Do everything in the right way.,读图与立意,细节,夸张,寓意,The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.,Dont be too confident in real life. Be honest and modest. Dont judge a book by its cover.,主语（描述-形容词或介词短语或从句）+谓语（描述-副词或带有描述性的动词）+宾语（描述）+状语（非谓语） 过渡词 主语（描述）+谓语（描述）+宾语（描述）,Describe the picture:,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture In the picture, there are/is (are) doing,with the details and for the theme,How To Develop Your Arguments,Arguments,Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life,Give your own comment/ suggestion/solution,How To Develop Your Arguments,As a result, it is wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our heads full.,(Description),(Interpretation&Implication),(Suggestion),Analysis For the Whole Passage,As is shown in the picture, a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label on its body, feeling proud and confident. (details),The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon. We might often meet some people who look confident, trying to impress others with their “rich” knowledge. (reality/purpose) However, just like the bottle in the picture, what they really know is just a little. There is no doubt that they need to learn more because what they have in their mind is far from enough. (result)As an old Chinese saying goes, “empty bottles makes the loudest noise.” (proverb),In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you this picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.,Description: As is vividly shown in the picture, 2. As can be seen in the picture 3. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing,Transition sentences: The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 2. It seems very ridiculous that However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.,Opinion/suggestion/solution: As far as Im concerned,/ From my point of view, It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,In the picture a boy with a heavy bag is typing quickly on a computer which hangs over his chest, feeling pleased. Though it seems convenient since he can use the computer wherever he wants, there is no doubt that he cant get rid of the attraction of the computer. The funny picture is the exact reflection of the kids in modern society, that is the addiction to the electronic products. Some kids rely on them so much that they can hardly keep their hands off them. Benefits as the advanced products have brought, being addicted to them does no good to the kids. Actually a waste of time in playing them will have a bad effect on kids health and study, worse still lead to committing crimes.,Possible version: (negative),As far as Im concerned, it is acceptable to spend proper time in playing the electronic products. However, overdoing is to spoil the future. Instead, the kids should join in some other meaningful activities to enrich their life.,评分标准： 文章是否扣题-描述与主题一致，自圆其说 结构是否完整-三部分 内容是否健康-乐观向上 逻辑是否清晰-议论要有逻辑性 语言是否准确-用词恰当，无语法错误 交际是否得体-情境，身份等,