书面表达训练课件.ppt
书面表达,2013英语高考专题复习,1,2,A fire broke out in the Hebin Hotel at about ten oclock last night. The fire was started was by a middle-aged man living in Room 315. who smoked in bed carelessly while watching TV. The bed clothes caught fire and the fire spread and soon was blew onto the fourth floor by the strong wind. Firemen arrived five minutes later and it took them 20 minutes to put out the fire. Several people were injured when they tried to jump down from the building and the man who had caused the fire was badly burnt.,假如你是某英文报纸学生版的记者，请你用英语报道一起火灾事故。 1.时间：昨天晚上9点左右。 2.地点：金星饭店。 3.原因：408房间的中年男子躺在床上看电视时抽烟不慎，引起床单着火，强风使大火从三层烧到四层，消防队员5分钟后赶到，用了30分钟将大火扑灭。 但火灾中有数人因跳楼受伤，抽烟者烧伤严重。 4.要求： 1）.短文必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥和发表自己的观点，但不能逐条翻译； 2）.字数110字左右。,常见经典句子结构,1. When it comes to 谈到提到 When it comes to smoking When it comes to playing computer games. When it comes to finding jobes When it comes to learning English When it comes to making friends When it comes to earning money in our spare time,2.There is a general debate nowadays about 目前，针对展开了广泛的讨论 There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of global warming. There is a general debate nowadays about school club activities.,3. It is widely acknowledged that 人们普遍认为 It is widely acknowledged that wealth is not the only prerequisite for happiness. It is widely acknowledged that entering university is still an important way for students to change their life.,4. An increasing number of people are 越来越多的人正 An increasing number of people are joining the “ Information Age “ through the Internet. An increasing number of students are taking measures to improve their English.,5. There is a growing wide awareness of 越来越多的人认识到 There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection. 越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。,6. Quite obviously, immediate action is needed to 很明显，需要立即采取行动来 Quite obviously, immediate action is needed to protect the environmtent around our school. Quite obviously, immediate action is needed to improve our English.,英语写作高分万能公式,开头万能公式一 名人名言（原理：名言听起来都很有道理） As the proverb says/goes/runs, “You are only young once.” (适用于自己记住的名言) It goes without saying that we can not be young forever. (适用于自己编的名言)-不言而喻,英语写作高分万能公式,开头万能公式二 数据（字）统计（原理：数据说明更具有说服力） According to a recent survey, about 78% of the students in our school use moblephones. Statistics show that 25% of fire accidents are coused by smoking.据统计,英语写作高分万能公式,据最近一项调查显示，高中生向老师请假的理由中有56%是假的。 据最近一项调查显示，有大概47%的学生喜欢骑自行车上学。 据最近一项调查显示，在某所中学，有67%的学生课余都是在利用手机上网。 据最近一项调查显示，有33%的中学生利用周末补习功课。,英语写作高分万能公式,结尾万能公式一 结论 Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that soming is not really a good habit. To sum up, it can be concluded that and so on,英语写作高分万能公式,结尾万能公式二 建议 Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that soming is not really a good habit. To sum up, it can be concluded that,英语写作高分万能公式,Obvioursly, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.(最经典最有价值的废话) Accordingly, I recommed that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.,英语写作高分万能公式,如何使文章条理化 推荐使用以下结构： To begin with, then, furthermore,finally To start with, next, in andition,finally First and foremost,besides, last but not least Most important of all,moreover,finally,英语写作高分万能公式,短语优先原则 使用理由：增分亮点；增加字数 I cant stand it. I cant put up with it. I want it. Im looking forward to it. I dont know what to do. I have no idea what I should do.,Thank You,
