要点齐全语言正确表达生动4行文流畅5适当发挥.ppt
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1、Writing skills,How to improve your writing,1.要点齐全 2.语言正确 3.表达生动 4.行文流畅 5.适当发挥,Pay attention to the following instructions when writing.,3.表达生动,4.行文流畅,专题复习:书面表达训练之三 如何使句子优美 如何使文章流畅,宝应县中学高三英语备课组,Sample 1 The students like to choose majors . They can learn interesting things . They will have good jobs
2、in the future. The students believe that the environment is important to us . They graduate from universities .They can find good jobs. They can get much money. I think students should go to a good university . We like it and we study hard at it.,Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they c
3、an learn what they are interested in . It will make it possible for them to have their favorite jobs in the future. , those who think differently believe that the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job.,so that,also,Howeve
4、r,and that,Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they can learn . It will their favorite jobs in the future. , the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job. , the best choice is a good major at a good university. If
5、 we cant obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, we study , we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.,so that,also,However,and that,In my opinion,because,what they are interested in,make it possible for them to have,those who think differently believe that,n
6、o matter where,so that,also,However,In my opinion,what they are interested in,make it possible for them to have,those who think differently believe that,no matter where,Elegance (语言优美),Coherence(行文连贯),句式多变化 作文更优美,怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义 怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得更加丰富多彩 怎样运用高级词汇,给文章增加亮点,怎样使句式多变语言优美呢?,1.What surpri
7、sed me most was that he didnt know me at all. = surprised me he didnt know me at all. = , he didnt know me at all.,不同的表达相同的意义,It,that,To my great surprise,2.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traff
8、ic jam .,lead to,result in,3.The man didnt know what he should do next. =The man didnt know _ _ _ next.,4.Hurry up, or youll miss the train. =You wont catch the train _ you _ hurry. =You will miss the train _ you hurry.,what to,do,if,dont,unless,5.虽然他是个孩子,但他懂得很多(一句多译) 1) _ _ 2)_,Although/ Though he
9、is a child, he knows a lot.,Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.,6.这本书是如此的有趣,以致于我读了一遍又一遍。 1)_ 2)_ 3)_ 4)_,This book was so interesting that I read it again and again.,This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again.,So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.,T
10、his was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.,7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom. = The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _ _ _ _ (用with的复合结构) The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _. (用独立结构),with a book in his hand,book in hand,句子开头的变化,变一变更好,1. T
11、he boy was surprised at what he had seen , he stood there and couldnt say a word.,= _ _ what he had seen, the boy stood there , _ _ _ a word. (形容词做状语),Surprised at,unable to say,2.I didnt realize my mistake until you pointed it out. = _not until you pointed it out _I realized my mistake.(强调句型) = _yo
12、u pointed it out _my mistake.(倒装句),Not until,did I realize,It was,that,3You are sure to succeed only by working hard. =_ sure to succeed. (only +状语提前),4. We all know that he is honest. = _ (It做形式主语) = .(as引导的非限制性定语从句),It is known to us all that he is honest.,As is known to all , he is honest,Only by
13、 working hard are you,5. I passed the physics exam with your help. 1).I passed the exam _ _your help 2).I couldnt have passed the physics exam _ _our help. 3).I couldnt have passed the physics your exam _help.,thanks to,but for,without,1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a pub
14、lic park should be _ _ _. 2. The railway in our county is being built. The railway in our county is _ _.,free of charge,under construction,3. We think the meeting is very important . = We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _. 4.The result is not satisfying at all. =The result is _ _ satisfying,hold the vi
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