要点齐全语言正确表达生动4行文流畅5适当发挥.ppt

Writing skills,How to improve your writing,1.要点齐全 2.语言正确 3.表达生动 4.行文流畅 5.适当发挥,Pay attention to the following instructions when writing.,3.表达生动,4.行文流畅,专题复习：书面表达训练之三 如何使句子优美 如何使文章流畅,宝应县中学高三英语备课组,Sample 1 The students like to choose majors . They can learn interesting things . They will have good jobs in the future. The students believe that the environment is important to us . They graduate from universities .They can find good jobs. They can get much money. I think students should go to a good university . We like it and we study hard at it.,Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they can learn what they are interested in . It will make it possible for them to have their favorite jobs in the future. , those who think differently believe that the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job.,so that,also,However,and that,Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they can learn . It will their favorite jobs in the future. , the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job. , the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cant obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, we study , we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.,so that,also,However,and that,In my opinion,because,what they are interested in,make it possible for them to have,those who think differently believe that,no matter where,so that,also,However,In my opinion,what they are interested in,make it possible for them to have,those who think differently believe that,no matter where,Elegance （语言优美）,Coherence（行文连贯）,句式多变化 作文更优美,怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义 怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得更加丰富多彩 怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点,怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？,1.What surprised me most was that he didn't know me at all. = surprised me he didn't know me at all. = , he didn't know me at all.,不同的表达相同的意义,It,that,To my great surprise,2.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam .,lead to,result in,3.The man didn't know what he should do next. =The man didn't know _ _ _ next.,4.Hurry up, or you'll miss the train. =You won't catch the train _ you _ hurry. =You will miss the train _ you hurry.,what to,do,if,dont,unless,5.虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多(一句多译) 1) _ _ 2)_,Although/ Though he is a child, he knows a lot.,Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.,6.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。 1)_ 2)_ 3)_ 4)_,This book was so interesting that I read it again and again.,This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again.,So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.,This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.,7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom. = The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _ _ _ _ (用with的复合结构) The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _. （用独立结构）,with a book in his hand,book in hand,句子开头的变化,变一变更好,1. The boy was surprised at what he had seen , he stood there and couldnt say a word.,= _ _ what he had seen, the boy stood there , _ _ _ a word. (形容词做状语),Surprised at,unable to say,2.I didn't realize my mistake until you pointed it out. = _not until you pointed it out _I realized my mistake.(强调句型） = _you pointed it out _my mistake.（倒装句）,Not until,did I realize,It was,that,3You are sure to succeed only by working hard. =_ sure to succeed. (only +状语提前),4. We all know that he is honest. = _ (It做形式主语) = .(as引导的非限制性定语从句),It is known to us all that he is honest.,As is known to all , he is honest,Only by working hard are you,5. I passed the physics exam with your help. 1).I passed the exam _ _your help 2).I couldnt have passed the physics exam _ _our help. 3).I couldnt have passed the physics your exam _help.,thanks to,but for,without,1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a public park should be _ _ _. 2. The railway in our county is being built. The railway in our county is _ _.,free of charge,under construction,3. We think the meeting is very important . = We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _. 4.The result is not satisfying at all. =The result is _ _ satisfying,hold the view,of great importance,far from,Some people claim that reading selectively is more helpful, since they believe that reading without choice is a waste of time.However,some other people argue that we should read extensively, for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields. In my opinion, both sides are going to extremes.,欣赏一下,起承转合好 作文更流畅,Task 1,在下列句子空白处 填入恰当的过渡用语, 使行文连贯流畅。,1) I dont want to go. , I have something important to do. 2) Id like to come, Im afraid I cant. 3) Lucy is twelve and Lily is eleven; , Lucy is one year older than Lily. 4) Some people waste food others dont have enough.,Besides,but,therefore,while,在下面短文空白处 填入恰当的过渡用语, 使行文连贯流畅.,Task 2,However , In a word, Besides that, But,A lot of people smoke. They say that smoking can bring them happiness. _ I am strongly against smoking. Maybe smoking can give people a little pleasure. _ , it brings much more harm to peoples health. Every year many people die from smoking-related diseases. _, smoking is also one of the causes of pollution. _ , I am strongly against smoking and I call on all the people to do something about it.,But,However,Besides that,In a word,在文中需要的地方 加上合适的过渡用语， 使行文连贯流畅。,Task 3,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I got angry.I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized（批评）the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,In a word,so that,Just then/Just at that moment,After,At last (In the end ),So,And then,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _ ，the salesgirl treated me coldly. _，she didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _，She said that I made it dirty. _，She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _, the manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _he knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,And then,In a word,I got so angry that,As soon as/ The moment,Just at that moment,如何使书面表达更加优美流畅?,1.学会不同方式表达 2.注意句式结构变化 3.适当使用高级词汇 4.合理使用连接用语,想一想:,Elegance,Coherence,Practice makes perfect!,Make our writing better Lets begin,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor. However,it has changed a lot since 1978.,People here live a better life than before .,书面表达：Sample 1,Now it is taking on a new look.,Sample 2,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the school-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education.,the newly built teaching building,Thank you.,Homework,Next period well discuss how to express your own opinions in your composition. If you want to know more, please search: www.kjcenter.net163.com,Thanks for your attention!,Goodbye!,Every student will be faced with the same question when he passes the college Entrance Examination: Should he choose a good major a good university? Different people will offer different answers. Some students give priority to a good major. What they cherish is specialty they like most. In their mind, whether the university is famous is not very important so long as he works hard, he can learn it well in any university and a bright future is awaiting him.,Other students pay more attention to the university. They attach great importance to the university because the environment is vital to the making of an excellent person and is the symbol of a good future job itself. How can you have a wide vision and broad horizon if you receive education in a small college? In a word, the best choice is a good university. We can only get such a chance after making great efforts. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major itself. ( give priority to 表示“优先考虑” ，cherish珍爱，珍惜，attach importance to重视）,