桂林十八中徐丽红.ppt
桂林十八中 徐丽红 正反观点类 写作教学定位背景- 对比类写作已成为高考英语书面表达 中一个重要形式 2006年高考江苏卷：青年志愿者在奥 运期间该做的和不该做的 2006年高考福建卷：良好饮食习惯和 不好饮食习惯之间对比 2006年高考陕西卷 外出旅游和待在家中进行对比 2005年全国卷II 北京动物圆是否应该搬出市外 2005年高考江西卷 学生是否应该网上交友 Teaching aims 1.To improve the general ability of writing 2.To practise writing about contrast 3. The ways to improve your writing 1) article structure 2) words and sentence structure 3) conjunctions and transitional words 4) handwriting Should students make friends on line ? Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study The internet helps make many friends . Some people are for it . Others are against it . Some students get cheated on line. Students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us 6 2 1 5 4 3 7 8 A possible version Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . _,others are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study ._ ,some students get cheated on line. _, students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us However Besides In my opinion Summary (正反观点对比范文结构 ) What should be included in an argumentative writing? Part1. State an opinion 点题：争论的观点是什么. Part2. Give some supporting reasons 正反两方的观点分别是什么 Part3. Draw a conclusion 你的观点是什么（一句话） Conjunctions and transitional words 转折类 but/yet/however/nevertheless/despite 对比类 on the contrary/rather than/instead of 递进强调类 besides/furthermore/moreover/above all/ to make matters worse/anyway/ 因果类 so/for/therefore/as a result of/due to/thanks to 时间类 first of all/ in the first place/meanwhile/finally 列举类 for example/ such as/ and so on 个人观点类 in my opinion/view as far as I know 结论类 in short / in brief/ in a word/ to sum up Pattern There is a discussion about/on _. Opinions are divided on the question, _ agreed, for they believe that _. For one thing, _ . For another thing, _. Furthermore/Besides_. However/ Nevertheless, _ disagreed with _. They hold the view that _. First of all,_. Moreover, _. Most important of all, _. In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned, _. Application 下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论 的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情况 ，并表明你自己的观点。 比例 40%学生赞赞同 60%学生不赞赞同 理由 1.便于同亲亲友联联系； 2.可以上网查资查资 料； 3.储储存有用信息。 1.手机辐辐射对对人健康有害； 2.响铃铃影响自己和他人学习习 ； 3.容易引起相互攀比。 注意：1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译； 2.字数约100字。 3.信的开头和结尾已写好 参考词汇：辐射radiation 3. store 1.keep in touch with communicate with It is convenient for sb to do sth 2. surf the Internet search for 6.lead sb to do sth compare with 5. affect/ influence/ have an effect(influence) on Listing useful phrases: 4. be harmful for /to do harm to
