写作专题复习.ppt

写作专题复习,How to play magic tricks on sentences ?,Welcome,Margaret,How many sentence patterns can you remember ?,VS,Different sentence structures,1.Simple sentence structures 简单句基本句型 2.Compound sentence structures 并列句句型 3.Complex sentence structures 复合句句型 4.Special sentence structures 特殊句型结构,2009年湛江高三测试基础写作 假设你是某笔记本电脑厂推销员，受该厂厂长委托，向来宾简单介绍“金星”牌笔记本电脑的情况 1.我厂有10多年生产电脑笔记本的历史。 2.产品功能齐全，质量上乘，操作简易，携带方便，价格合理，美观。 3.在全省笔记本电脑评比中曾获第一名。 4.畅销国内外，有良好的售后服务。,我厂有10多年生产电脑笔记本的历史,？,改变句子成分位置 改变谓语动词及其时态 改变谓语动词语态 改变句子开头 巧用with/without 结构 巧用非谓语动词结构 巧用并列连词 巧用复合句 巧用强调句和倒装句 巧用固定句型,approaches,Summary1: change the position of sentence parts 改变句子成分位置,simple sentence,Our factory has a history of producing laptops over ten years.,1.Our factory has over ten years history of producing laptops.,Summary1: change the position of sentence parts 改变句子成分位置,Summary2: change predict and its tense 改变谓语动词及其时态,simple sentence,Our factory has a history of producing laptops (for) over ten years.,2.Our factory has already produced notebook computers (for) over 10 years.,3.Our factory started to produce laptops over 10 years ago.,Summary2: change predict and its tense改变谓语动词及其时态,Summary3: change the voice of predict 改变谓语动词语态,simple sentence,4.Laptops have been produced in our factory for over 10 years.,Our factory has already produced laptops for over 10 years.,Summary3: change the voice of predict改变谓语动词语态,Summary4: change the beginning of a sentence 改变句子开头,simple sentence,5. More than 10 years ago our factory started to produce laptops.,Our factory started to produce laptops more than 10 years ago.,Summary4: change the beginning of a sentences改变句子开头,An old apple tree stood at the entrance of the valley. At the entrance of the valley stood an old apple tree A motorcycle came round the corner. Round the corner came a motorcycle,Summary4: change the beginning of a sentences改变句子开头,Summary5: apply “with/without” structure 巧用with/without 结构,simple sentence,6. With over 10 years history of producing laptops, our factory is surely an experienced and reliable manufacturer.,Our factory has a history of producing laptops over ten years.,巧用with/without 结构,The driver escaped and didnt stop. He left the old man lying on the road. The driver escaped_ _,巧用with/without 结构,without stopping，,leaving the old man lying on the road.,Summary6: apply “non-finite forms of verbs” 巧用非谓语动词结构,simple sentence,With 10 years history of producing laptops, our factory is surely an experienced and reliable manufacturer.,7.Having,Summary6: 巧用非谓语动词结构,complex sentence,Adverbial clause,Attributive clause,Noun clause,我厂有10多年生产电脑笔记本的历史。 Our factory has a history of producing laptops for over ten years.,自从我厂生产电脑已经有10年了。 8.It is ten years since our factory began to produce laptops.,自从我厂生产电脑已经过去10年了。 9.10 years has passed since our factory began to produce laptops.,Adverbial clause状语从句,直到10年前我厂开始生产电脑。 10.Our factory didnt begin to produce laptops until ten years ago.,Attributive clause（定语从句）,我厂有10多年生产电脑笔记本的历史。 Our factory has a history of producing laptops for over ten years.,我厂是一个有10多年生产电脑笔记本历史的制造商。 11.Our factory is an experienced manufacturer which has 10 years history of producing laptops.,Noun clause 名词性从句,我厂有10多年生产电脑笔记本的历史。 Our factory has a history of producing laptops for over ten years.,我厂有10多年生产电脑笔记本的历史这个事实可能会让这儿的每个人吃惊。 12.The fact that our factory has produced laptops for over 10 years may surprise everybody here.,special sentence structures,It is/was+被强调+that+,Inversion sentence,巧用一些约定俗成的句型,13.It is 10 years ago that our factory started to produce laptops. 14.It is our factory that has a history of producing laptops for over ten years.,Our factory started to produce laptops 10 years ago.,It is/was+被强调+that+,Inversion sentence倒装句,直到10年前我厂开始生产电脑。（not until） Our factory didnt begin to produce laptops until ten years ago.,15.Not until,ten years ago did our factory begin to produce laptops.,16.It is acknowledged /a fact that 17.No one can deny the fact that 18.There is no doubt that 19.What may surprise you is that ,巧用一些约定俗成的句型,Our factory has a history of producing laptops for over ten years.,在全省笔记本电脑评比中曾获第一名。畅销国内外，有良好的售后服务。,Practice1:一句多译！,改变句子成分位置 改变谓语动词及其时态 改变谓语动词语态 改变句子开头 巧用with/without 结构 巧用非谓语动词结构 巧用并列连词 巧用复合句 巧用强调句和倒装句 巧用固定句型,1.Venus laptop has won the first place in a provincial laptop appraisal .It sells well home and abroad and has good after-sale service.,改变句子成分位置;改变谓语动词及其时态 改变谓语动词语态;改变句子开头 巧用with/without 结构;巧用非谓语动词结构 巧用并列连词;巧用复合句 巧用强调句和倒装句 巧用固定句型,Sydney is an important commercial, industrial and tourist centre. It lies on the southeast coast of Australia. It has an area of 35,059 square miles. The population of it is more than three million. In Sydney, you can enjoy some famous sights, such as harbor, Sydney Harbor Bridge and Opera House. There are many places, such as cinemas, night clubs, zoo parks and beaches in Sydney. The popular sports are surfing and swimming. .,Practice 2: Work in group of four to polish the following passage by applying different sentence structures.,(1)Sydney, (which lies/is located/situated on the southeast coast of Australia), is an important commercial, industrial and tourist centre. (2)With an area of 35,059 square miles and a population of three million, Sydney has grown into an attractive city/an elegant/graceful lady/beauty, which/who catches the eyes of worldwide tourists, who flow to enjoy its natural scenery as well as splendid architecture, such as harbor, Sydney Harbor Bridge and Opera House. (3)Besides, cinemas, night clubs, zoo parks ,beachesvarious kinds of entertaining and relaxing places are also available there. (4)Plentiful sunshine, pleasant climate, gentle sea breeze provide advantages for water sports. (5)As a result, the popular sports are surfing and swimming.,Translate the following sentence in as many ways as possible. 产品功能齐全，质量上乘，操作简易，携带方便，价格合理，美观。 2.Rewrite the whole passage. Dont forget to keep the passage clear and coherent.,Homework,Good bye!,Taiwan lies to the west of the Pacific Ocean. North of it lies the East China Sea and southwest, the South China Sea. The Taiwan Straits separates Taiwan from Fujian. Taiwan is the largest island in China. It has an area of about 36,000 square kilometres and it has a population of over 20 million. Its rich in natural resources. Bananas,rice,tea and so on are famous at home and abroad. Clothes, food, electronic products and so on are also well-known all over the world. .,Practice 2:Polish the following passage by applying different sentence structures.,顺序first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important 解释in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, 递进whats more, in addition, besides, moreover 让步even if, even though, although, after all, in spite of, despite, though, whatever may happen 转折but, however, rather than, instead of, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, whereas 原因because, for this reason, due to, thanks to, because of, as, since, owing to 结果as a result, so, therefore, as a consequence 总结on the whole, in a word, in brief, in short,强调after all, still, indeed, of course, above all, surely, certainly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly. 对比on the other hand, on the contrary, however, while, whereas, instead, but, nevertheless, otherwise 列举for example, such as, for instance, takefor example, except (for) 时间recently, nowadays, lately, then, later, next, finally, at last, in the end, soon, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, immediately, now and then, as soon as, afterwards,3.With/Having complete functions and high quality, Venus laptop is a laptop which is not only easy to operate and convenient to bring, but also is cheap and beautiful.,4. not only is it easy to operate and convenient to bring but also it is cheap and beautiful.,2.Its main productVenus laptop, has complete functions and is of high quality. Besides, it is not only easy to operate and convenient to bring but also (it is) cheap and beautiful.,10 years has passed since our factory began to produce laptops. With charming appearance and reasonable price, the Venus laptop produced by our factory has won the reputation home and abroad. Besides, not only is it easy to operate and convenient to bring, but also it has complete functions and trustworthy quality. _.,(1)Sydney, (which lies/is located/situated on the southeast coast of Australia), is an important commercial, industrial and tourist centre. (2)With an area of 35,059 square miles and a population of three million, Sydney has grown into an attractive city/an elegant/graceful lady/beauty, which/who catches the eyes of worldwide tourists, who flow to enjoy its natural scenery as well as splendid architecture, such as harbor, Sydney Harbor Bridge and Opera House. (3)Besides, cinemas, night clubs, zoo parks ,beachesvarious kinds of entertaining and relaxing places are also available there. (4)Plentiful sunshine, pleasant climate, gentle sea breeze provide advantages for water sports. (5)As a result, the popular sports are surfing and swimming.,Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympics, and now there are seventeen vents in all.,15. How fast he speaks English, which is surprising to me. 16. How fast he speaks English, which is a surprise to me. 17. How fast he speaks English, and it is a surprise to me. 18. How fast he speaks English, and it is surprising to me. 19. What a fast English speaker he is! It does surprise me. 20. It is he who speaks English so fast, which surprises me. 21. It is his fast English speaking that surprises me. 22. That he speaks English so fast is surprising to me. 23. That he speaks English so fast surprises me. 24. That he speaks English so fast is a surprise to me. 25. I am surprised that he speaks English so fast. 26. I am surprised that he speaks such fast English. 27. I am surprised that he speaks English with fast speed. 28. I am surprised by his fast English speaking. 29. I am surprised by his English speaking with fast speed. 30. It is surprising to me that he （should）speak English so fast. 31. It is surprising to me that he （should）speak such fast English. 32. It is surprising to me that he （should）speak English with fast speed. 33. It is surprising to me that his spoken English is so fast. 34. It is a surprise to me that he （should）speak English so fast. 35. To my surprise, he speaks English so fast. 36. To my surprise, he speaks such fast English. 37. To my surprise, he speaks English with fast speed. 38. To my surprise, his spoken English is so fast. 39. When he speaks fast English, I am surprised. 40. When he speaks English fast, I am surprised.,How to apply different sentence structures to your writing？Simple sentence: He speaks English so fast. I am surprised. His fast English speaking is surprising to me. His fast English speaking is a surprise to me. His fast English speaking makes me surprised. Compound sentence: He speaks English so fast and it is surprising to me. He speaks English so fast and it is a surprise to me. Complex sentence He speaks English so fast, at which I am surprised. He speaks English so fast, which is a surprise to me. He speaks English so fast, which is surprising to me. He speaks English so fast, which makes me surprised. He speaks English so fast that I am surprised. 倒装句 So fast does he speak English that I am surprised. So fast does he speak English that it surprises me.,在全省笔记本电脑评比中曾获第一名。 Venus laptop has won the first price in a provincial laptop appraisal . 使用被动语态: Venus laptop has ever been rewarded the first prize in a provincial laptop appraisal. It sells well all over the world and have good after-sale service. 使用非谓语动词 Having good after-sale service, it sells well all over the world,句型1： S + V + P （主 + 系动词 + 表语） 句型2： S + Vt + O （主 + 及物动词+ 宾语） 句型3： S + Vi+ (A) 主 + 不及物动词+ （状语） 句型4： S + Vt+ IO + DO （主 + 及物动词+ 间接宾语 + 直接宾语） 句型5： S + Vt+ O + OC （主 + 及物动词+宾语 + 宾语补足语）,3、图表作文常用句型 As is shown in the graph 如图所示 The graph shows that 图表显示 As can be seen from the table, 从表格中可以看出 From the chart, we know that 从这张表，我们可知.,有年的历史: Have/with years history of/ with a history of years/,