2019最新高考英语专题解析课件-基础写作[地点介绍][1]2.ppt

1.neighbor与为邻 2.be made up of/consist of由组成 3.be located /situated in/near坐落在 4. serve as当用 5.with /has a history of有的历史,相关短语,6. with/has a population of有人口 7.cover an area of 面积有. 8. the third largest city第三大城市 9. be famous for以而著名 10. be well-known for/as因为/作为而出名,11. on its east lies 东边有 12. a fantastic place 一个极好的地方 13. be rich /abundant in盛产 14. a three-storeyed building一栋三层楼的房子,1. I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。 2. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。,相关句式,3. Guangzhou, a city with a population of about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.广州, 拥有一千三百人口的一座城市, 有三百多年的历史了。 4. Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million.这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里, 人口大约是10, 000, 000。,5. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它自然资源得天独厚, 有丰富的煤和金矿, 而且气候温和。 6. Our school is no longer what it used to be.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。,1. 介绍或描述地点的基础写作, 通常以表格形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性, 另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容, 不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译, 如不能写成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”这样不地道的句子,相应的表达应该是: Guangzhou lies in the south of China.,2. 确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。 3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句, 而应该具体写出描述的对象，如the Great Wall, Hong Kong等。但如果整篇文章 多处用“it” 等作主语,文章会稍显逊色, 所以在写作过程中, 可根据文意适当变换主语, 如改写为the place, the city等。,你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。 【信息要点】,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,例题导写 1. 按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间, 也避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。 2. 草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。请翻译要点： (1) 有(多久)的历史 _,It has a history of .,(2) 世界最长的城墙 _ (3) 6000多千米长 _ (4) 由石头, 砖头做成 _ (5) 由人工修建 _,be constructed by hand,the longest wall in the world,6000 kilometers long,be made of stones and bricks,6) 防御外来入侵者 _ _ (7) 每隔几百米 _,every few hundred meters,prevent the country from being invaded; defend the country against foreign invaders,(8) 著名旅游景点之一 _ _ (9) 吸引许多外国游客 _,one of the famous scenic spots; one of the famous places of interest; one of the famous tourist attractions,attract many foreign visitors,3. 规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语过长, 应转用 “a / an / the +名词+of”的表达, 例如, “两千多年的历史”应该写成“a history of two thousand years”, 而不能写成“two thousand years history”。,4. 变换表达, 丰富句式。 请按要求完成句子： (1) It is more than 6000 kilometers in length, _(“是世界上最长的城墙”, 使用非限制性定语从句) (2) It was the Great Wall _ _in ancient times. (“帮助人们防御外来入侵者”, 使用强调句),that helped people fight against the foreign invaders,which makes it the longest wall in the world,(3)_ _, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”, 使用原因状语从句) (4) The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth, _ _.(“每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”, 使用非谓语结构),(5) The Great Wall is _ a famous historical attraction _ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(使用“如此以致”的句型表达) (6) So _that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“长城如此吸引”, 使用倒装句),attractive is the Great Wall,such,that,参考范文 Ladies and Gentlemen， Welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall, which is more than 6, 000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine.,As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.,能力提高 1. 请根据中文提示, 完成有关地点介绍的语汇积累。 (1) 位于 _ (2) 靠近 _ _,next to / close to, in the neighborhood of, neighboring.,be located /situated in；lie(s)in,(3)有(多少)人口 _ _ (4)有(多久)历史 _,It has a population of . ; With a population of ., sth. .; The population has reached.,It has a history of .; With a history of .， sth.,(5) 占(多大)面积 _ _ (6) 表达“容量” The hotel _(拥有)120 rooms; The building can _(容纳)5000 people.,cover an area of .(square kilometers / square meters),possesses,hold,(7) 是(多少)长/宽/深 It is. _/ _ / _. =It is. in _/ _/ _ . (8) 著名景点 a place of _, a historical _, a scenic spot (9) 表达“吸引、著名” sth. _sb.; sth. be_ (形容词); be famous _(因而著名); be famous _(作为而著名),as,long,wide,deep,length,width,depth,interest,attraction,attract / appeal to,attractive / appealing / wonderful,for,2. 请根据中文, 完成短文。 Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and (1) _ _(政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心).(2) _ _ (全市面积7434.4平方公里), it is home to more than 11 million people.,Covering / With an area of 7434.4 square kilometers,Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou (3)_ (气候温暖湿润). Besides, it is a famous city with (4)_ _(有着2, 200多年历史)and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou (5) _ _ (旅游资源丰富).,enjoys a warm and wet climate,你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组，在汇报课上，各小组成员要介绍一个独具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的关于香港的信息。,参考词汇：澳门 Macao南丫岛 Lemma Island 写作内容 请根据以上表格内容, 介绍香港的有关情况。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,参考范文 Hong Kong, a city situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, is famous for traveling, food, shopping and film industry as well. In this modern city, there are various kinds of brands from all over the world for people to choose from, which makes Hong Kong an ideal place for shopping.,Hong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on. In the restaurants run by the local people, visitors can enjoy the delicious food at a reasonable price. Whats more, Hong Kong people are creative and passionate, creating their promising future with wisdom and diligence.,精华点评,介绍地点的文章, 往往涉及一些地方著名景点的介绍。在日常阅读积累中, 学生必须记住一些著名的、常用的景点, 如本文出现的“迪士尼乐园” (Disneyland), “海洋公园”(the Ocean Park), 这些香港著名景点也曾经出现在学生课本, 需引起重视。此外, 对于语言表达的难点, 要学会转换思维方式,了解中英文表达的差异, 这样才可以在写作时准确、地道地翻译要点, 如题目中出现的“勤劳的双手”, 英语表达时不能直接翻译, 而用diligence或hard work便可表达中心要点。,2012年体育盛事奥运会将在伦敦举行。你校一年一度的英语体育节将至，请你根据以下表格内容, 用英语写一篇介绍伦敦的文章，张贴在体育节的宣传栏上。 写作内容,London, the most important industrial city of England, serves as the centre of its political, economic and cultural life. Located in the southeast of England, it covers an area of 1580 square kilometers. The weather is changeable and it rains often. People can enjoy the convenience of the means of transportation, but at a relatively expensive price. With its beautiful scenery, London attracts visitors from all over the world, leaving them a deep impression.,参考范文,精华点评,写作时, 分清题目背景引入说明部分和真正的写作内容。本题中, “2012年体育盛事奥运会将在伦敦举行”、“你校一年一度的英语体育节将至”只是引入该基础写作的一个背景说明。根据题目要求,真正的写作内容仅仅是表格内的信息, 写作时不能画蛇添足。对于信息量较大的句子, 可考虑使用“with+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构, 例如：(1) London is situated in the southeast of England, with an area of 1580 square kilometers.,Thank you !,