高考英语书面表达专题辅导-基础写作[论证观点].ppt

相关短语,1. come to realize 开始意识到 2. as important as 和一样重要 3. push sb. to do 促使某人做某事 4. focus more on 更加关注 5. spoken language skills 口语技能/水平,6. communicate with 和交流 7. therefore 因此 8. more attention should be given to 应该更加关注 9. in summary 总之 10. end up doing 以做结束,11. in return 反过来 12. far outweigh. 远远比重要 13. first of all 首先 14. shopping online 网上购物 15. due to lack of supervision 由于缺乏监督 16. whats worse 更糟糕的是,17. bank account 银行账户 18. be harmful to 对有害 19. for instance 例如 20. search for 寻找,1. Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud. 很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。 2. Therefore, more attention should be given to teaching and learning spoken English.因此要更加注意教学英语口语。,相关句式,3. Second, some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision. 其次, 由于缺乏监督, 有些网上出售的产品很可能是假货。 4. There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping.毫无疑问, 网上购物很方便。,6. any students rely so much on the Internet that they have lost their ability to create.很多学生过度依赖互联网, 以致于失去了创新能力。,1. 注意审题, 避免缺漏信息点。一般而言, 观点论证的文章通常都是总分或总分总的结构。,2. 考生在论证观点的时候要注意行文严密的逻辑性, 因此考生要注意使用相关的连词、副词或者短语提升文章的层次感。 3. 在语言运用方面, 考生可以掌握一 些常用于议论文写作的短语和句型, 如compared with., it is clear /obvious that., From what I have mentioned above we can see that.等。,你校进行题为“是否应该考查英语口语”的 英语辩论赛。以下是正方的主要观点：略,写作内容 请你根据以上内容写一篇短文, 代表正方作 最后的总结陈词。 1. 阐述考查英语口语对各方面的积极影响； 2. 呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容; 首句 已给出,不计入句子总数。,例题导写 1. 认真审题。在本作文题的完成中, 不少考生都集中精力对图表内容进行描述, 却忽略了写作内容里的第二个要点：呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。因此, 考生在下笔前,要通读题目, 不能漏掉细节。,2. 分析文体。论证观点无疑属于议论文的范畴, 着重于说理性和逻辑性。考生在写作前要对信息点进行分析，理清信息点之间的关系是递进，转折还是因果关系。本文中, 考查口语对学生、教师和社会三方面都是有利的, 这就是递进关系, 而最后呼吁各界重视英语口语教学则与前面内容构成因果关系, 因此考生可以选用适 当的连词提高文章的逻辑性。,3. 划分信息。本题的信息点较多, 考生在写作前一定要先划分信息点, 否则就会导致写作过程中漏掉信息点或者导致思维混乱。呼吁各界重视口语教学无疑可以作为最后一个信息点, 而对学生、教师、社会有利则要用四个句子概括。因此考生可以考虑2个句子表达口语考试对学生的有利因素, 1个句子表达其对教师的好处, 1个句子表达其对社会的好处。,4. 词汇整理 翻译或完成下列短语。 句1： (1)养成的习惯 _ (2)提高水平 _,improve ones level,develop /form the habit of.,(3)认识到 _ (4)同等重要 _ 句3： (5)关注 _,focus on/focus ones attention on/ concentrate on,come to realize that/be aware that,be as important as/be of the same importance as,句2：,(6) 提高能力/技能 _ (7) 增加趣味性 _ 句5 (8) 重视 _,attach importance to/pay attention to,develop ones skill,make.more interesting/add interest to,5. 难句翻译： 翻译下列句子并合并成一句。 (1)促使(学生)形成朗读和用英语对话的习惯。 (1)It helps students develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English. (2)提高(学生)英语水平。 (2)It improves their English level.,合并： Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English so that they can improve their English level. (结果状语从句),或Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English which in turn improves their English level.(定语从句),句3：(1)(口语测试使教师)关注口语教学。(1)The speaking test pushes our teachers to focus more on teaching spoken English. (2)(口语测试使教师)提高自身口语水平。 (2)The speaking test encourages teachers to improve their own spoken language skills. (3)(口语教学)提高课堂趣味性。 (3)English teaching makes the class more interesting.,合并： The speaking test pushes our teachers to focus more on teaching spoken English, makes the class more interesting and encourages teachers to improve their own spoken language skills.,4. 连句成文,(1)在某人看来：in ones opinion /as far as sb. is concerned / from where one stands / from ones perspective /in ones viewpoint (2)同意某个观点: agree with sb. /be for the opinion that/firmly support the view that,(3)首先：above all /first of all/to start with/to begin with/in the first place/in the first instance (4) 表示“递进”的词汇：Whats more/in addition/besides /moreover /furthermore /additionally/For one thing, for another. (一方面,另一方面),(5)因此: as a result / thus /hence /so / therefore / accordingly / consequently/as consequence (6)表示“总结”的词汇: on the whole /in conclusion /in a word/to sum up/in brief / in summary /to conclude/to summarize/in short,参考范文 Ladies and gentlemen, in summary our team has argued that the testing of spoken English is both necessary and beneficial. Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English which in turn improves their English level.,Students come to realize that oral English is as important as reading and writing. In addition, the speaking test pushes our teachers to focus more on teaching spoken English, makes the class more interesting and encourages teachers to improve their own spoken language skills.,Nowadays, English is considered to be a global language so we can use it to communicate with people from other countries more easily. Therefore, we believe that more attention should be given to teaching and learning spoken English and this can be done by testing spoken English.,能力提高 1. 短语翻译,(1)众所周知 : (2)基于；根据 : (3)以致 : (4)有助于 :,contribute to,as is known to all,on the basis of,so that,(5) 考虑到这严重的状况: in view of such serious situation/having considered this serious situation (6) 以往任何时候 :than ever before (7) 通过以上讨论 :from what has been discussed above (8) 得出一个结论 :draw a conclusion （9）远远超出 far outweigh,3. 翻译句子,(1)许多家长相信通过额外的教育活动, 他们 的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识, 当他们长大后. 这些对他们就业是大有好处的。 Many parents hold the opinion that through additional educational activities their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.,(2)许多专家指出体育锻炼有助于身体健康。 (2) Many experts point out that physical exercise is of great benefit to a persons health. /Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes to a persons physical fitness.,(3)大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力, 而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 (3) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their inter-personal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets /which may be of great help for them to find a job in the future.,(4)考虑到这严重的状况, 我们比以往任何 时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。 (4) In view of such a serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycles are more important than any time before. /Having considered this serious situation, we need such environmentally-friendly vehicles as bicycles more than ever before.,(5) 通过以上讨论, 我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的, 但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.,假设你的朋友John写信告诉你他打算开通网银进行网上购物, 但你并不赞成网上购物, 于是给他写了一封信, 陈述了网上购物的弊端。,写作内容 1. 你对网上购物的看法； 2. 你为何持有这种看法； 3. 建议理智的消费。,参考范文 You are writing to tell me that you are going to open the online bank service for shopping online but I dont think its a good idea. There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages. First of all, shopping online is a waste of money because buyers tend to be persuaded into buying something they dont really need.,Second, some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision. Whats worse, nowadays there are also many reports related to online shopping that personal information and even bank accounts are stolen. Therefore, I suggest that you think twice and remain rational when you are shopping online.,精华点评,根据写作的内容, 本文的结构应该是总分总，第一句总起说明作者的观点，而最后一句使用therefore总结作者的观点。范文开篇通过there is no doubt that的句型，采用了先抑后扬的写作手法, 使观点更客观和鲜明。,考生平时注意积累词汇, 如使用了tend to be persuaded into doing sth.表示消费者容易被误导消费, fake表示“伪劣的”。最后, 建议“理智消费”, 很多考生可以用think twice和remain rational。 在连贯性方面, 本文使用了first of all, second, whats worse等递进连词使文章的层次分明。,写作内容 1. 阐述现代技术对于学生的负面影响； 2. 呼吁学生重视传统的学习手段。,假设你们班就“现代技术对学生的学习是否有好处”展开了讨论, 你作为反方代表进行发言。,参考范文 Marvelous as it looks at first sight, modern technology does not help students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency in most cases. First of all, modern technology is harmful to a learning mind because it distracts. For instance, a student is likely to turn on his computer to search for resources, but end up watching videos. Also, students would easily become disoriented in the huge sea of information.,Furthermore, many students rely so much on the Internet that they have lost their ability to create and think independently. From what I have stated above, I can draw a conclusion that modern technology does not help students learn more quickly or better and students should not ignore the traditional means of learning.,精华点评,这篇范文语言精炼，言简意赅。很多考生误以为英语写作要长篇大论，但有时却容易使文章显得累赘。范文使用distract表示使学生分心, 使用become disoriented表示使学生(在大量信息中)不知所措，这些用词都是比较地道的，另外在举例说明时，范文用end up doing sth的短语生动地说明了网上信息如何让学生分心。最后，考生不要忘记议论文的逻辑性和连贯性，如本文用了first of all， for instance， but， also， furthermore， from what I have stated above等连词提高文章的连贯性。,Thank you !,