1、中职英语高考写作训练中职英语高考写作训练陆道夫陆道夫 主讲主讲2012年年3月月vThis program describes what the learner is doing,beginning with a firm foundation of thinking and oral language,which has its roots in the early years of the young learners life.As children gain facility with oral English,they move naturally into working with
2、 written language,discovering encoding-decoding information and developing reading fluency.vGradually,they connect reading with composition,using higher order thinking skills.Literature,then,becomes the students text as they listen to and read books for pleasure and information,entering into transac
3、tions with each author,and then responding to the experience with original thinking expressed orally and in writing.Evaluation,both formative and summative,is on-going throughout the program,but it is not the learners primary concern.Jean Piaget 外语学习阶段论v1.Sensorimotor stage:0-2 yearsv2.Preoperationa
4、l stage:2-7yearsv3.Concrete operational stage:7-11yearsv4.Formal Operational stage:11-15years1.Sensorimotor stage:0-2 yearsv Begins to make use of imitation,memory,and thought;v Begins to recognize that objects,do not cease to exist when they are hiddenv Moves from reflex actions to goal-directed ac
5、tivity2.Preoperational stage:2-7yearsv Gradual language development and ability to think in symbolic form;v Able to think operations through logically in one direction;v Has difficulty seeing another persons point of view.3.Concrete operational stage:7-11yearsv Able to solve concrete,hands-on proble
6、ms in logical fashion;v Understands laws of conservation and able to classify and seriate;v Understands reversibility.4.Formal Operational stage:11-15yearsv Able to solve abstract problems in logical fashion;v Thinking becomes more scientific;v Develops concerns about social issues,identity.句子理解1v(a
7、)He arrived at 2:30 and was told to wait in the VIP lounge.(b)He arrived at 2:30.He had been told to wait in the VIP lounge.v译文：(a)句：他两点半到达，有人让他在贵宾休息室等候；(b)他两点半到达，在到达以前就有人对他说，在贵宾休息室等候。v差别何在？句子理解2v Every company tries to have a team of wizards developing machines that use a computer driven laser to d
8、o wonders.v译文1：每个公司都试图掌握一群发明机器的奇才，他们利用电子计算机发出激光来创造奇迹。v译文2：奇才发明机器，机器利用电子计算机激发激光，再由这种激光创造奇迹。句子理解3vThe car came to a dead stop.v译文1：汽车停住了。v译文2：汽车停下了。v译文3：汽车不动了。v译文4：汽车死了。v译文5：汽车嘠的一声刹住了。v哪个好？为什么？作文得分要点作文得分要点1.格式格式2.人称人称3.要点要点 4.时态时态5.字数字数 6.语法语法7.书写书写 1、中式中式英语英语 2、句式单一，句式单一，平铺直叙平铺直叙 3、词汇词汇掌握掌握不牢，拼写错误不牢，
9、拼写错误 4、书写书写不规范，大小写、标点符号不规范，大小写、标点符号Common mistakes1.I think we should think more good thinks.2.dare not raise their heads before the other students.3.keep a normal heart(口口)keep a normal state of mind keep an easy mind take it easy 中式英语例析中式英语例析vFaced with failure,some of them feel depressed all the
10、time.Whats worse,they throw doubt upon their own ability and no longer work hard at their studies.句式句式单一单一，平铺直叙，平铺直叙书写书写不规范不规范词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖所有覆盖所有要点要点 2.语法语法结构和结构和词汇不单一词汇不单一 3.注意语句注意语句间的连接间的连接成分成分和连贯性，全文和连贯性，全文结构紧凑结构紧凑 4.语言语言得体规范得体规范要要点点全全连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？语言语言地道
11、规范地道规范改变改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry,the boy hurried home.The boy,hungry,hurried home.巧用句型转换巧用句型转换1.把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语 He had finished supper.He went out to ha
12、ve a walk then.Having finished supper,he went out to have a walk.A.合并为简单句合并为简单句2.把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语 He was brought in.His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.B.合并为复合句合并为复合句1.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered eve
13、ryone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2.In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.which In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives con
14、venient,pleasant With the development of so that Beijing,peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient,pleasant and colorful.Nowadays,Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient,pleasant and colorful.C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句She was anxious to find a job after she finished
15、her studies.Having finished her studies,she was anxious to find a job.1.把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句2.把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语I insisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.三三.灵活灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、合句、分词状语分词状语 Though he is wealthy,he works hard.Wealthy as he is,he works hard
16、In spite of/Despite his wealth,he works hard.He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.As soon as we arrived at the village,we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.On arriving at the village，we were warmly.The moment we arrived at the
17、village,we wereWe were warmly welcomed by thevillagers immediately we arrived at the village.No sooner had we arrived at the village than we Hardly had we arrived at the village when we.注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以一些单词，以增加文采增加文采Dont worry about your expensesfor university education
18、and we will try to help you.and we will make the greatesteffort/do our best/try every meansto help you.At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.I came up with a good idea.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to/struck/came to me.
